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Friday, September 16, 2011

Hide n Seek

Often when I look out of my window
I see gentle swaying of the willow
The bumble bees playing hide n seek
Kissing the rose buds on the cheek
The new blades of grass breaking ground
Inching their way upwards without a sound
Often when I stare at the big blue sky
The birds flying n chirping in delight
The stars too playing hide n seek
As an occasional comet streak
Often when I sit by the river side
I see the lovely maiden bathing in delight
Bosoms heaving with the swell of tide
Playing the game of hide n seek in delight

8 comments:

  1. :) I so like the sensuous end to the poetry..

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  2. This is so lovely, especially the phrase, Kissing the rose bud. Ending is superb!!!

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  3. Hi.. I like the way you have so aptly rhymed each pair of lines. Very nice poem.
    :)

    ~Punam

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  4. Thank You Punam for visiting my blog and liking it

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  5. I see gentle swaying of the willow
    The bumble bees playing hide n seek

    it gave a feeling of simple emotions very gentle and sweet. liked it

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  6. @some unspoken words- Thank you Anu for visiting this site and liking the poem.

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