A cuddle and a kiss
On supple rotund cheeks
Unspoken love in abundance
Radiates weeks upon weeks
Unflinching bond so strong
Breaks into a lullaby song
The mother’s caress of child
Makes their world go round
Sweet smiles on their lips
Worth more than billion pounds
It's so beautiful, you can dig each word and cherish it. Love the title...Wish could use some of the words in my poem...
ReplyDeleteSaru
first i read saru's poem ,then saw ur comment visited ur link enjoyed urs too! very beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteso just thought of sharing my thoughts of same topic but different view...its baby's feeling just check it out! if u are free!:)
keep smiling always :)
http://smiling-soul-sowmya.blogspot.com/2011/04/babys-feeling.html
Thanks a lot for passing by my blog..
ReplyDeleteYou write beautifully... Love is magical.. loved the poem..!!!
I am following you and hope to stay connected :)
This is soooo sweet and beautifully penned, Rahul! Love it :)
ReplyDeleteSir its beautifully written! connected
ReplyDeleteThat is true!! peace, love go beyond money..
ReplyDeletevery well penned Rahul ji.
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@ Saru- You are so gracious. I don't have enough words to thank you!
ReplyDelete@ Sowmya- Thanks for liking! I am honored that you visited my blog.I read your link and it has been very well written!!!
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The most beautiful relationship in the world.
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet poem about a mother-child relationship.
ReplyDelete@Purba- Thanks for your nice comments!
ReplyDelete@ Rachna- Thank you for liking this!
It indeed is unspoken love in abundance.. wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteKP- Thanks for visiting this blog! Am grateful to you for those kind remarks.
ReplyDeletesuperlike,,
ReplyDeleteeven on mothers day , i had written a poem in hindi for my mother http://ruchichunk.blogspot.com/2011/05/my-mottyy-mummy.html.
*likes* mother's love is so pure and priceless. loved the rhyming of the poem. Great post Ji...
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Anand
Life's like that