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Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Love Unbound



A cuddle and a kiss
On supple rotund cheeks
Unspoken love in abundance
Radiates weeks upon weeks
Unflinching bond so strong
Breaks into a lullaby song
The mother’s caress of child
Makes their world go round
Sweet smiles on their lips
Worth more than billion pounds

14 comments:

  1. It's so beautiful, you can dig each word and cherish it. Love the title...Wish could use some of the words in my poem...
    Saru

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  2. first i read saru's poem ,then saw ur comment visited ur link enjoyed urs too! very beautifully written :)

    so just thought of sharing my thoughts of same topic but different view...its baby's feeling just check it out! if u are free!:)

    keep smiling always :)
    http://smiling-soul-sowmya.blogspot.com/2011/04/babys-feeling.html

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  3. Thanks a lot for passing by my blog..
    You write beautifully... Love is magical.. loved the poem..!!!

    I am following you and hope to stay connected :)

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  4. This is soooo sweet and beautifully penned, Rahul! Love it :)

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  5. Sir its beautifully written! connected

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  6. That is true!! peace, love go beyond money..

    very well penned Rahul ji.


    #_#
    1955-2011

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  7. @ Saru- You are so gracious. I don't have enough words to thank you!
    @ Sowmya- Thanks for liking! I am honored that you visited my blog.I read your link and it has been very well written!!!
    @Madhulika- You made my day with your appreciation! Thanks for following!!
    @Lady Fiona- Thank you for all those kind words!
    @ Ashish- Good to see you back and liking this one!
    @ Chintan- It feels good to have your support in my writing endeavors!

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  8. The most beautiful relationship in the world.

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  9. What a sweet poem about a mother-child relationship.

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  10. @Purba- Thanks for your nice comments!
    @ Rachna- Thank you for liking this!

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  11. It indeed is unspoken love in abundance.. wonderful poem!

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  12. KP- Thanks for visiting this blog! Am grateful to you for those kind remarks.

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  13. superlike,,
    even on mothers day , i had written a poem in hindi for my mother http://ruchichunk.blogspot.com/2011/05/my-mottyy-mummy.html.

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  14. *likes* mother's love is so pure and priceless. loved the rhyming of the poem. Great post Ji...

    Cheers,
    Anand
    Life's like that

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