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Sunday, November 27, 2011

The Desert Rose



An innocent smile so divine
   She has a heart like goldmine
Her deep blue eyes twinkle
     Shimmer like a glass of wine
Her name is Rose
   For her youth of desert pine
She walks with elegance
     Like sway of a vine
                                                  Midst thorns stands solitary Rose
                                                       A symbol of love sublime
                                 

54 comments:

  1. Wow! who is she??
    someone close I guess!!
    :))

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  2. A beautiful poem dear Rahul and such a lovely image to accompany it.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  3. Beautiful poem, Rahul! One of my internet 'handles' is *Red Desert Rose* ~ I feel like you found me the perfect image :D

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  4. Sir, this is magical and music at the same time!
    And Desert Rose .. what an apt title too. Perfect piece!

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  5. lovely, looks like a piece of classical eng poetry :)

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  6. Very beautifully written... you are really talented

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  7. What a romantic poem. My first visit and I am glued. Following you now. Thank you for visiting Journey and reading.

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  8. Beautiful poem. Am spellbound!! :O

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  9. Nice one! Love the image too.

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  10. Lovely poem and nice choice of words!! :)

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  11. Lovely, delicate words. The lady who had inspired you to write them must be truly special!

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  12. अच्छी रचना के लिए आपको बधाई । आप हमेशा सृजनरत रहें और मेरे ब्लॉग पर आपकी सादर उपस्थिति बनी रहे । धन्यवाद ।

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  13. Exquisite:-) Just loved some of the ending rhymes!

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  14. Wonderful poem and perfect image. Love both!

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  15. @ A- Thanks for liking!
    @ Harman- Thanks for that nice comment! Good guess!!:)
    @ Dianne-Thanks for liking!
    @ Lady Fiona- That was indeed a kind comment! Happy that you liked it..
    @ Crystal- Thanks a lot for the appreciation!
    @ Humming Words Publishers- Welcome tomy blog. Thanks a lot for those kind words!
    @ Purvi- Am honored to get that kind of appreciation from you!
    @ Rimly- I am thankful to you for liking as well as following my blog! You made my day!
    @Shreya- Am very happy that you liked it!
    @ Shilpa- Thanks a lot for liking!
    @ Lady Fi- Thanks a lot!
    @ Rden- Thanks for your appreciation!
    @ Binu-Thanks for the follow and liking!
    @Sam- Such sweet remarks! Yes special someone;)
    @ Prem Sarovar- Thank You for visiting my blog and liking .
    @ Nasnin- So happy to see you back on my blog with such kind words
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  16. Beautiful! You're such an eloquent writer :)

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  17. Thanks a lot Gayatri for those generous words of praise! I am happy you liked it!

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  18. Beautiful words, loved the composition...lovely!

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  19. It's beautiful. Following you now. :-)

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  20. @ Arti- Coming from a seasoned blogger like you, I treasure this comment.
    @ Sneha Sunny- Thank you for liking and also following! You made my day :)

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  21. when i read your poem...the face that came to my mind was that of rose(kate winslet) from titaninc.....was she the inpiration? it felt like it's exactly discribing her character in the movie.....

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  22. @ A Guilty Conscience- Now that you tell me, I can see some resemblance at least in name! Thanks for liking..
    @ Alka- Thanks for your nice comment!

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  23. This is brilliant, such a beauty needs care and appreciation! Penned by a brilliant and passionate mind! Great poem my friend!

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  24. @ Kalai-Thanks a lot for liking!
    @ Prime Aque- Welcome to my blog! Am thankful to you for such generous praise!

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  25. Wonderful words.. beautifully crafted..!

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  26. @hot girl- Welcome to my blog! Thanks for liking..
    @ Krishnapriya- Welcome to my blog. Am happy you liked it!

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  27. Short, sweet and beautiful poem. Picture is appropriate with the poem.

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  28. Thanks Babli, for those encouraging words!

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  29. I am happy that you liked it! Thanks, Saru.

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  31. Sushma, Welcome to my blog! Thanks for your kind comment and for following my blog

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  32. Thank You Agnes! Good to see you after a while :)

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  33. Oh, I realy liked this one, it has all the elements that appeal to my romantic mindset.
    Beautiful image and words, you have a heart of an poet.:)
    xoxo

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  34. Thanks Zuzana, for your gracious comment and praise!

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  35. Thank you Soma, for liking and also following my blog! You made my day :)

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  36. Your such a great poet!:) I like it much:)Very romantic words used here, thanks..:)

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  37. @Sagittarian- Thanks for your nice comment!

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  38. Wow... Great poem ji.. Liked it :) This title reminded me of another online friend - nick named 'desert rose'!

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