The calm winds bring relief on a sunny noon
Strong gust on a hot day belches dragon’s inferno
Freezing wind slices thro the body benumbing sense
Like a killer's knife scalding with a devilish intent
Sit by a seaside, enjoy the sunset as gentle winds
Lap the young
waves to play with small shingles
The winds of change now sweep our planet
Raging tempests redefine the contours like
never before
PS Image Kind courtesy Google.
(The poem is a reminder to us for need to preserve the nature and reckless deforestation is denuding the earth and posing fresh dangers and leading to natural calamities)
PS Image Kind courtesy Google.
(The poem is a reminder to us for need to preserve the nature and reckless deforestation is denuding the earth and posing fresh dangers and leading to natural calamities)
Well written poem...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
DeletePowerful poem and image!
ReplyDelete"Like a killer's knife scalding with a devilish intent"
Great writing, Rahul :-)
Thanks Princesa, for those words of encouragement!
DeleteWe should preserve it and give back to mother nature. I don't know how world will be in 20 years. I was reading National Geographic few days back and was amazed how they were talking about making mug and hay houses for climate control.
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem with words of wisdom!
So true Saru! It is really disturbing at times to read and view programs on channels like National Geographic to get enlightened and hope for some breakthroughs!
DeleteConservation and preservation of any natural resources automatically keeps the land strong and prosperous.. lovely poem and an image..
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely right! Thanks Padmaja!
DeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteThank You, Rachna!
Deletetoo sad the situation we humans have gotten ourselves into! scalded indeed!
ReplyDeletevery nice poem
Hope some wise senses will prevail before it is too late! Thanks Sujatha!
Deletenice and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteThank You!
DeletePicture looks so natural. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Urmi! Good to see you again:)
DeleteSo true! I hope we realise what we r doin to the nature before its all gone!
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DeleteMy fear too, Ria! Too little.. too late..:( should not be the case!
DeletePowerful words,meaningful poem.very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sharmila, for liking!
Deleteperfectly written and a great message as well :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Purvi, for those nice words!
DeleteAmazingly written poetry! Every kind of wind has its way of treating us and few winds can cause disasters which we should be well prepared and careful about.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my bog, Elvirah!Am happy you liked..
DeleteA wonderful poem dear Rahul and a great message. Yes we should and must stop cutting down our forests before we completely destroy our Earth.
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Thanks Dianne! Hope more people understand this too!
DeleteWe went to Kukke Subrahmanya temple in Karnataka recently. Normally, the narrow road went through forest like area until a few years back. Now, the roads are broadened and many guest houses are coming up! Felt sad.
ReplyDeleteI remembered this, when I read your beautiful poem, Rahulji! Very well written words.
Sandhaya, unfortunately, we do not believe in creation with harmony! It pains me immensely when I see in places like Hong Kong and Singapore where I am currently traveling, there is a perfect harmony with nature! We have a long way to go...
DeleteYes, nature is our mother.
ReplyDeleteYes Agnes,like a mother it sustains us for rest of our lives..:)
DeleteNice and thoughtful for preservation of nature.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vyankatesh!
DeleteA thought provoking poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Nisha!
Deletea good poem giving a very good message.
ReplyDeleteThanks Adi, for those kind remarks!
DeleteGreat poem, Rahul. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachna! It is a pleasure to get those comments from you!:)
DeleteSuch powerful words! I am so glad that you are writing in sake of saving the environment, this is a course I am passionate about!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam! I am very happy that you too are passionate about nature:)
DeleteWhat an amazing poem- so beautiful and so strong in its message. I just wanted to read it over and over- the words were amazing.
ReplyDeleteVery kind words, Anjuli! Thanks a lot!
DeleteMan is the worst thing to have happened t onature
ReplyDeleteand i guess all this is anger towards mankind to say how angry the nature is ..
beautiful poem sir.
Bikram's
Bikram, it is the greed which has driven us to the brink! No other creation of god is more in satiated than a human:( We reap what we sow..
Deleteah, put some snow in to it and you almost have my last days..
ReplyDeleteVery powerful poem!
Some words from Job
"Does the rain have a father?
Who is father to the drops of dew?
Who is the mother of the ice?
Who gives birth to the frost from the sky
and even the surface of the ocean is frozen?"
Happy week to you!
Thank you Tanya, for that lovely add on!I will dedicate one full post to snow:)
DeleteSir the new post of mine is inspired by ur older one. Please check it out
ReplyDeleteThanks Adi! I read your poem and was touched with your nice compliment! Nicely written..
DeleteBeautiful words to reminisce the beauty of nature and to remind us that we might loose all that God-given purity by our recklessness. Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteSo true, Raj! Thanks for that lovely remark!
DeleteI can feel my inside stir up as I read the 'winds of change'....to appreciate and preserve life's beauty. It's a delight reading you here :)
ReplyDeleteI am grateful for those nice comments!Also, thanks a lot for following my blog! You made my day:)
Deletevery well written indeed Rahul!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for those nice words!
DeleteA meaningful weave Rahul...
DeleteThanks Alka:)
DeleteVery true. The picture and the poem both are really good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rama!It is indeed a pleasure that you are following my blog! A big thanks!!:)
DeleteCan we have a tempest that can blow away the corrupt to a marooned island?
ReplyDeleteI too so wish, Purba that the lumpen lot are whisked away to somewhere desolate when the next tornado/ tempest strikes!:)
DeleteI totally agree with you and with the above comment....
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Francesca! Your comments are always eagerly awaited:)
DeleteAgree with you , we need to protect the nature with top priority . Lovely poem .
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for liking!
DeleteApt words. We should act before it is too late by doing our bit towards the preservation of god's greatest gift to mankind.
ReplyDeleteSo true Arti! I only hope that the coming generations will be able to see the world which is better than what we see today!
DeleteThe winds of change now sweep our planet
ReplyDeleteRaging tempests redefine the contours like never before
Loved these :)
Very well written Rahul Sir :)
Thanks a lot for those nice words! BTW the real flower is prettier than the pink flower :)
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Delete-Nice blog sharing information
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ReplyDeleteGood one!
ReplyDeleteWell timed.
keep it goin;)
Welcome to my blog! Thanks Amit!
ReplyDeleteVery well written Rahul ji...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Chintan! Happy you liked it!
DeleteThanks Harman!
DeleteGreat message :)
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Thanks a lot Megha! Hope you had a nice holiday:)
ReplyDeleteI think we are in over our heads manipulating nature. And we're seeing the results with the number of calamities on the rise.
ReplyDeleteI am truly honored Gayatri, to have a reader like you, who spent so much time to read what I wrote:) I do not have enough words to thank you!Yes, going against nature is what is disturbing and the results are there for us to see..
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