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Monday, February 20, 2012

Sweet Surrender


The golden sky n drifting white clouds
  A sweet song of lovebirds heralds a new morn
The melting mists reminding of her love lore
  Her angelic brown eyes n million dollar smile
 Makes heart flutter n dance to lovebird’s song
    Her elegant beauty n curves like a winding river
 Sweet surrender to her tantalizing looks forever

PS- Image Kind courtesy Google 

72 comments:

  1. That was much more than a Sweet surrender...loved it... :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog! Thanks a lot for liking!

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  2. ANgelic brown eyes :)
    wow..
    can call her in line of duty during some wars :)

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    1. Sure Deepak! With all her ammunition she can disarm many:)

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    1. Thanks Francesca for your nice comments:0

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  4. So sweet and enhance... Lovely :)

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    1. Thanks, Single Girl! Your comments are really sweet:)

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  6. Someone already said it. I dont mind saying it again. Intense :)

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    1. Am grateful for those words, Insignia:)

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    1. It is the weather which is playing mischief:) There was one already on Valentine, if you like to read:)
      http://rahulsblogandcollections.blogspot.in/2012/02/valentine-kiss.html

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  8. You always choose the best picture and this one compliments a lover's sweet surrender :)

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    1. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder:) Thanks for that sweet comment..

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  9. This prose was beautifully written , Sirjee . I was out blogwalking and came across ur blog . Great posts , I must say .

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    1. Welcome to my blog! Am happy you were not disappointed:)

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  10. Ahh, what a *beautiful* 'sweet surrender' this is! Loved it ~ keep the Valentine poems coming he he {|:-)

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    1. Thanks Princesa! Blame the nice weather:)

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  11. This is such a sweet and romantic poem dear Rahul, I loved your words.
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Thank you Dianne! I am happy that you liked this one:0

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  12. So, I guess, Valentine's day came a week later? :P

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    1. Yes! a tube light effect:)
      Incidentally,there was one already on Valentine, if you like to read:)
      http://rahulsblogandcollections.blogspot.in/2012/02/valentine-kiss.html

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  13. ohh wow!!

    'Makes heart flutter n dance to lovebird’s song'

    These lines make my heart skip a beat.. Wonderful Rahulji!

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    1. Welcome to my blog, Jenny! Thanks a lot for your nice comments:)

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    2. Thanks a lot for following my blog, Jenny! You made my day...:)

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  14. You are very good with words! Enjoyed reading it!

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    1. A sincere thanks for those kind words, Sandhya!

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  15. Dripping with romance, nice poem.

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    1. UmaShankar, just realized that poetry too can be intoxicating:)Thanks a lot!

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  17. Poetry is indeed intoxicating. Who can resist such a temptation? It's always better to surrender...Lovely play of words...:)

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    1. Thank you Saru, for your kind words!Who understands Poetry more than you:)

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  18. I am enjoying your poems a lot, Rahul. You have a great way with words.

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    1. Thanks Rachna, for those words!I treasure your comments:)

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  19. Just Love the way your words are framed to give a wonderful meaning. A big fan of your poems Sir. :-)

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    1. Ashwini, I do not have enough words to thank you and this makes me push to write more:)

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  20. Wow! The spirit of valentine spreads the week after, too! Lovely thoughts!

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    1. Yes Shilpa, it is the weather I guess:)Thanks!

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  21. "A sweet song of lovebirds.." ah, lovely:-)

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  22. Nice words and I really love that photo/

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    1. Am happy you liked! Thanks a lot Agnes:)

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  23. this is wonderful! Left me with a smile.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Anjuli! A smile on reader's face is the best reward:)

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    1. Thanks, Kavita for those generous words:)

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  25. It is very sensitive and soft.. the words that come out of you are always amazing!

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  26. Ha, Ha Sujatha, Love is in the air:)Thanks..

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  27. wow.. this is simple amazing... loved it :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog, Sanjana! Thanks for liking:)

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  28. Thanks a lot, Sunakshi. Am happy you liked it:)

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  29. BEAUTIFUL...in every sense of the word,Sir..:)

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  30. Thanks a lot, Yashi for having liked it:)

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  31. -Good piece of information.

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