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Monday, February 20, 2012

Sweet Surrender


The golden sky n drifting white clouds
  A sweet song of lovebirds heralds a new morn
The melting mists reminding of her love lore
  Her angelic brown eyes n million dollar smile
 Makes heart flutter n dance to lovebird’s song
    Her elegant beauty n curves like a winding river
 Sweet surrender to her tantalizing looks forever

PS- Image Kind courtesy Google 
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71 comments:

  1. CYNOSUREFebruary 20, 2012 at 5:33 PM

    That was much more than a Sweet surrender...loved it... :)

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  2. DFebruary 20, 2012 at 5:57 PM

    ANgelic brown eyes :)
    wow..
    can call her in line of duty during some wars :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:14 AM

      Sure Deepak! With all her ammunition she can disarm many:)

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  3. Selvaggia CapizziFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:10 PM

    Sweet and intense!

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  4. ASFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:43 PM

    nice :)

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  5. JeevanFebruary 20, 2012 at 7:21 PM

    So sweet and enhance... Lovely :)

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  6. DimpleFebruary 20, 2012 at 7:42 PM

    wow .. very beautifully described.. sweet :D

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:16 AM

      Thanks, Single Girl! Your comments are really sweet:)

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  7. InsigniaFebruary 20, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    Someone already said it. I dont mind saying it again. Intense :)

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  8. PurbaFebruary 20, 2012 at 7:55 PM

    A Valentine special, is it?

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:20 AM

      It is the weather which is playing mischief:) There was one already on Valentine, if you like to read:)
      http://rahulsblogandcollections.blogspot.in/2012/02/valentine-kiss.html

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:24 PM

    Lovely, as usual! :)

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  10. AyushiFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:11 PM

    You always choose the best picture and this one compliments a lover's sweet surrender :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:22 AM

      Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder:) Thanks for that sweet comment..

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  11. LadyFiFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Very sweet!

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  12. hamaarethoughts.comFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    Too good....romantic mus say!!!

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  13. Of Prisms and LivesFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:16 AM

    This prose was beautifully written , Sirjee . I was out blogwalking and came across ur blog . Great posts , I must say .

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:23 AM

      Welcome to my blog! Am happy you were not disappointed:)

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  14. --February 21, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Ahh, what a *beautiful* 'sweet surrender' this is! Loved it ~ keep the Valentine poems coming he he {|:-)

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  15. dianneFebruary 21, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    This is such a sweet and romantic poem dear Rahul, I loved your words.
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:25 AM

      Thank you Dianne! I am happy that you liked this one:0

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  16. BGTFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:22 AM

    So, I guess, Valentine's day came a week later? :P

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:18 AM

      Yes! a tube light effect:)
      Incidentally,there was one already on Valentine, if you like to read:)
      http://rahulsblogandcollections.blogspot.in/2012/02/valentine-kiss.html

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  17. JennyFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    ohh wow!!

    'Makes heart flutter n dance to lovebird’s song'

    These lines make my heart skip a beat.. Wonderful Rahulji!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:19 AM

      Welcome to my blog, Jenny! Thanks a lot for your nice comments:)

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    2. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:25 PM

      Thanks a lot for following my blog, Jenny! You made my day...:)

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  18. SandhyaFebruary 21, 2012 at 12:58 PM

    You are very good with words! Enjoyed reading it!

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  19. Rama AnanthFebruary 21, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    Dripping with romance, nice poem.

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  20. umashankarFebruary 21, 2012 at 5:22 PM

    Words drunk on love!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 7:29 PM

      UmaShankar, just realized that poetry too can be intoxicating:)Thanks a lot!

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  21. Saru SinghalFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:24 PM

    Poetry is indeed intoxicating. Who can resist such a temptation? It's always better to surrender...Lovely play of words...:)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 8:59 PM

      Thank you Saru, for your kind words!Who understands Poetry more than you:)

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  22. Rachna ChhabriaFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    I am enjoying your poems a lot, Rahul. You have a great way with words.

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 22, 2012 at 8:16 AM

      Thanks Rachna, for those words!I treasure your comments:)

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  23. Shilpa GargFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:36 PM

    Wow! The spirit of valentine spreads the week after, too! Lovely thoughts!

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  24. TaniaFebruary 22, 2012 at 2:29 AM

    "A sweet song of lovebirds.." ah, lovely:-)

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  25. AFebruary 22, 2012 at 5:37 AM

    Nice words and I really love that photo/

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  26. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 22, 2012 at 8:19 AM

    Ashwini, I do not have enough words to thank you and this makes me push to write more:)

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  27. AnjuliFebruary 22, 2012 at 8:33 AM

    this is wonderful! Left me with a smile.

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM

      Thanks a lot, Anjuli! A smile on reader's face is the best reward:)

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  28. Kavita SahariaFebruary 22, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    This is brilliant ! Loved it .

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  29. ♥●• İzdihër •●♥February 22, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    Beautiful poem,Rahul Sir.

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  30. padmajaFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    It is very sensitive and soft.. the words that come out of you are always amazing!

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  31. SoniaFebruary 22, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Wow thats such a beautiful poem.. :)

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  32. Sujatha SathyaFebruary 22, 2012 at 10:06 PM

    aashikana Sir sweet one indeed

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  33. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:52 AM

    Ha, Ha Sujatha, Love is in the air:)Thanks..

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  34. ShilpiFebruary 23, 2012 at 2:39 PM

    wow.. this is simple amazing... loved it :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:12 PM

      Welcome to my blog, Sanjana! Thanks for liking:)

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  35. S.February 24, 2012 at 11:19 AM

    Wow nicely written. :)

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  36. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 24, 2012 at 12:14 PM

    Thanks a lot, Sunakshi. Am happy you liked it:)

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  37. UnknownFebruary 26, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    BEAUTIFUL...in every sense of the word,Sir..:)

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  38. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 27, 2012 at 4:13 AM

    Thanks a lot, Yashi for having liked it:)

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  39. bantiMarch 2, 2012 at 3:21 PM

    -Good piece of information.

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