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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

A Valentine Kiss



The lustrous dewdrops slide down the leaves
    Glisten on the green grass in morning mist
The swaying rose buds frolic n twirl
    Gentle February breeze carry their whiff
Ensconced in their dream world the lovers sit
       Holding hands share a sweet Valentine kiss


PS- Image Kind courtesy Google

74 comments:

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    1. Thanks Izdiher! Hope you too had a lovely Valentine day:)

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  2. moving beyond the poetry nice thoughts :)

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    1. Thanks Sowmya, for that lovely comment:0

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  3. This month of Love brings out the best in every writer :)
    Its beautiful Rahul Sir :)

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    1. True! Thank you for that nice comment:)

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  4. So lovely valentine kiss..:) Happy valentine!:)

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  5. thats so good!! :) Happy Valentine's Day!!

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    1. Thanks a lot Ria! Hope you to had a very enjoyable Valentine day!

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  6. Such a soothing kiss! So sweet poem :)

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  7. So, I follow more poets than I thought :) Lovely poem :)

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    1. Nice one Binu! Sometimes it feels good to pen a poetry:)

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  8. Happy Valentines day dear Rahul, you are a true romantic at heart, I like that.;))
    xoxo

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    1. Zuzana, Hope you too had a wonderful Valentine day!The august company of romantic writers sometimes gets rubbed in:)Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment..

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  9. A lovely, romantic poem dear Rahul and the image is so beautiful.
    Happy Valentines day dear friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Thans a ton, Dianne!Wishing you the same:)

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  10. Beautiful lines and most fantastic imagery.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Happy Valentines Day :)

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  11. Always Ensconced in their dream World!.Yes! Lovely poem Sir :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashwini, for those words of appreciation:)

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  12. One word - WoW !! U are the real thing sirjee.

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  13. That's not only sexy, but its a fun pic to look at.

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    1. Thanks a lot Sujatha, for those lovely words:)

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  15. Beautiful words for a happy day!

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    1. Thanks Sandhya! Best wishes to you too:)

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  16. Hi there Rahul, wishing you and your loved one a wonderful Valentines Day...this is such a sweet poem!

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    1. Thanks a lot Sam! Am happy you liked it and hope you had a great time with your loved ones too:)

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    1. So sweet Princess! Thanks a lot for that beautiful comment:)

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  18. Awww...so lovely!! Happy Valentine's Day to you!

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    1. Thanks Ash for that nice comment! Happy Valentine day to you as well...:)

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  19. WoW ~ one of you best! Loved every single line!! Perfect image. I hope you had a Happy ♥ day, Sir Rahul {|:-)

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    1. I bow to thee , Princesa Fiona for those ever kind remarks! I am happy that you liked it:)Hope you too had a wonderful day with all your loved ones!

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  20. ah, this is indeed a most beautiful valentine's poem- ever so sweet. My favorite line was:

    The swaying rose buds frolic n twirl
    Gentle February breeze carry their whiff

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    1. Thanks you Anjuli, for those generous remarks!Hope you had a nice time on the V-Day

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  21. Very well written. Also the earlier post of your is very interesting.
    www.thoughtsofpaps.com

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  22. Aww, such a lovely poem. All I could say after reading it was - AWW! :)

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    1. Welcome to my blog Akriti! Thanks a lot for that nice comment:)

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  23. Wow!! Such a sweet poem - perfect for such a lovely occasion :)

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  24. Lovely words for a month like February with all the love and roses. Beautiful!

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    1. Thank you Elvirah! The month of February is just amazing:)

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  25. Such a sweet and romantic poem - so right for Valentines! Thank you for sharing!

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  26. Beautiful Sir. It's like reading a classic...:)

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    1. nice,,,happy V day ..hope you had some good time :)
      the poem is too good ... every word is romantic..
      have a nice week end!

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    2. Shreya, Am happy you liked it:)

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    3. Thanks Harman. I am delighted that you liked it!Hope you too enjoyed the V day

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  28. nice light happy Vday poem romantic tooo


    Bikram's

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    1. Thanks a lot, Single Girl for your sweet comment:)

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  30. WOW! Love it! Beautiful

    Love
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  31. Thanks Megha! Am happy you liked:)

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  32. wow..its lovely. Perfect for the season:)

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    1. Welcome to my blog Aishwarya! I am happy you liked it:)

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  33. Awww this is such a lovey doey poem! I can so relate to it. I picture the couple amongst the leaves and the grass fresh with the morning dew..
    Lovely words Rahulji!

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  34. Thanks a lot, Jenny for having liked it:)

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