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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

A Valentine Kiss



The lustrous dewdrops slide down the leaves
    Glisten on the green grass in morning mist
The swaying rose buds frolic n twirl
    Gentle February breeze carry their whiff
Ensconced in their dream world the lovers sit
       Holding hands share a sweet Valentine kiss


PS- Image Kind courtesy Google
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  1. ♥●• İzdihër •●♥February 14, 2012 at 1:47 PM

    very very nice,sir.

    Have a lovely day :).

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:45 AM

      Thanks Izdiher! Hope you too had a lovely Valentine day:)

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  2. ASFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:59 PM

    lovely!

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  3. smiling soulFebruary 14, 2012 at 2:37 PM

    moving beyond the poetry nice thoughts :)

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  4. AyushiFebruary 14, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    This month of Love brings out the best in every writer :)
    Its beautiful Rahul Sir :)

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  5. SagittarianFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:57 PM

    So lovely valentine kiss..:) Happy valentine!:)

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  6. RiàFebruary 14, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    thats so good!! :) Happy Valentine's Day!!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:48 AM

      Thanks a lot Ria! Hope you to had a very enjoyable Valentine day!

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  7. JeevanFebruary 14, 2012 at 6:44 PM

    Such a soothing kiss! So sweet poem :)

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  8. BGTFebruary 14, 2012 at 6:53 PM

    So, I follow more poets than I thought :) Lovely poem :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:49 AM

      Nice one Binu! Sometimes it feels good to pen a poetry:)

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  9. ZuzanaFebruary 14, 2012 at 6:57 PM

    Happy Valentines day dear Rahul, you are a true romantic at heart, I like that.;))
    xoxo

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:51 AM

      Zuzana, Hope you too had a wonderful Valentine day!The august company of romantic writers sometimes gets rubbed in:)Thanks a lot for such a lovely comment..

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  10. dianneFebruary 14, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    A lovely, romantic poem dear Rahul and the image is so beautiful.
    Happy Valentines day dear friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  11. Zach GeorgeFebruary 14, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    Beautiful lines and most fantastic imagery.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Happy Valentines Day :)

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  12. BrijeshFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:08 PM

    One word - WoW !! U are the real thing sirjee.

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    That's not only sexy, but its a fun pic to look at.

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  14. Sujatha SathyaFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:17 PM

    sweet one, short and sweet :)

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  15. SandhyaFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    Beautiful words for a happy day!

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  16. SamFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:39 PM

    Hi there Rahul, wishing you and your loved one a wonderful Valentines Day...this is such a sweet poem!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:57 AM

      Thanks a lot Sam! Am happy you liked it and hope you had a great time with your loved ones too:)

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  17. Pakistani TeenagerFebruary 14, 2012 at 10:55 PM

    This is really beautiful!!
    Enchanting!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:57 AM

      So sweet Princess! Thanks a lot for that beautiful comment:)

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  18. AshFebruary 15, 2012 at 1:29 AM

    Awww...so lovely!! Happy Valentine's Day to you!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:58 AM

      Thanks Ash for that nice comment! Happy Valentine day to you as well...:)

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  19. --February 15, 2012 at 2:39 AM

    WoW ~ one of you best! Loved every single line!! Perfect image. I hope you had a Happy ♥ day, Sir Rahul {|:-)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 9:00 AM

      I bow to thee , Princesa Fiona for those ever kind remarks! I am happy that you liked it:)Hope you too had a wonderful day with all your loved ones!

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  20. AnjuliFebruary 15, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    ah, this is indeed a most beautiful valentine's poem- ever so sweet. My favorite line was:

    The swaying rose buds frolic n twirl
    Gentle February breeze carry their whiff

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 9:01 AM

      Thanks you Anjuli, for those generous remarks!Hope you had a nice time on the V-Day

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  21. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 8:53 AM

    Thanks a lot Ashwini, for those words of appreciation:)

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  22. PAPSFebruary 15, 2012 at 11:45 AM

    Very well written. Also the earlier post of your is very interesting.
    www.thoughtsofpaps.com

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  23. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2012 at 12:47 PM

    Aww, such a lovely poem. All I could say after reading it was - AWW! :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:44 PM

      Welcome to my blog Akriti! Thanks a lot for that nice comment:)

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  24. ArtiFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:06 PM

    Wow!! Such a sweet poem - perfect for such a lovely occasion :)

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  25. ElvirahFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:34 PM

    Lovely words for a month like February with all the love and roses. Beautiful!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:45 PM

      Thank you Elvirah! The month of February is just amazing:)

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  26. ashokFebruary 15, 2012 at 9:22 PM

    wow!!! superb! wah!

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  27. MartinaFebruary 15, 2012 at 9:38 PM

    Such a sweet and romantic poem - so right for Valentines! Thank you for sharing!

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  28. Saru SinghalFebruary 15, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    Beautiful Sir. It's like reading a classic...:)

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  29. ShreyaFebruary 15, 2012 at 11:06 PM

    Beautifully penned, Sir :)

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    1. hamaarethoughts.comFebruary 16, 2012 at 5:10 AM

      nice,,,happy V day ..hope you had some good time :)
      the poem is too good ... every word is romantic..
      have a nice week end!

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    2. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:44 AM

      Shreya, Am happy you liked it:)

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    3. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:45 AM

      Thanks Harman. I am delighted that you liked it!Hope you too enjoyed the V day

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  30. Kavita SahariaFebruary 16, 2012 at 11:03 AM

    Beautiful verses !

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  31. BikramFebruary 16, 2012 at 4:23 PM

    nice light happy Vday poem romantic tooo


    Bikram's

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  32. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 16, 2012 at 4:39 PM

    Thanks for liking, Bikram!

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  33. DimpleFebruary 16, 2012 at 10:03 PM

    awww very very romantic.. Loved it :D

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 17, 2012 at 9:04 AM

      Thanks a lot, Single Girl for your sweet comment:)

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  34. Megha SarinFebruary 19, 2012 at 3:07 AM

    WOW! Love it! Beautiful

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  35. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 19, 2012 at 2:40 PM

    Thanks Megha! Am happy you liked:)

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  36. TaniaFebruary 19, 2012 at 3:01 PM

    Ah, lovely <3!!

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  37. AishwaryaFebruary 20, 2012 at 12:49 AM

    wow..its lovely. Perfect for the season:)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:49 AM

      Welcome to my blog Aishwarya! I am happy you liked it:)

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  38. JennyFebruary 21, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    Awww this is such a lovey doey poem! I can so relate to it. I picture the couple amongst the leaves and the grass fresh with the morning dew..
    Lovely words Rahulji!

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  39. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 21, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    Thanks a lot, Jenny for having liked it:)

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