मधुर मुस्कान ( Sweet Smile)
यह मधुर मुस्कान तुम्हारी
लगे चंद्र ज्योति सी प्यारी
सागर से गहरे है नयन
मुंख
पर एक छवी निराली
उमड़ घूमड़ करते मेघा
यह मनोहर बयार और
बरखा
पतो की धीमी सी आहट
मुझे तुम्हारी
याद दिलाती
जलद हवा के घोड़े पर
चढ़
तुम्हारी आगोश
में आता
और तुम्हें बाहों में भर
दूर कहीं ले
जाता
यह मनोहर
मुस्कान तुम्हारी
निखरे
सूर्य ज्योति सी प्यारी
Translated:
Sweet Smile
This beautiful smile of yours
Is like a beautiful moonshine
Eyes are deep as an ocean
The face has a unique glow
The rumbling clouds
And cool breeze n rain
Slow rustle of the leaves
Remind me of you
Quickly if I could ride a horse
Take you in my arms
To take you to a far off place
The lovely smile of yours
Radiates like a lovely sunshine
PS- This poem was my first brush
with writing after engagement and was sent in post to my would be wife(Jyoti). This is my 100th post and I
dedicate it to her for encouraging me to take up writing after all these years.
I wish to thank you wonderful readers and writers who have enriched me and made
my journey enchanting and made it possible, to score a ton.
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Self and my wife a day after our marriage |
OH MY ,WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM
ReplyDeleteJoyti buhat khuborrat hain.
Thanks a lot, Izdiher for those beautiful words of appreciation! Shukriya:)
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ReplyDeletereally touching poem rahul and i must say u were a rather handsome man not that u still arent:)and your wife very beautiful woman..
ReplyDeleteA bow to thee for those kind words , Alka:)
DeleteDid you get married in 80's ?Seriously my parents one pic is exactly like that ..same way of sari,even same color , his coat same as yours ,same pose .
ReplyDeleteSo Sweet, Izdiher! So many happy coincidences:)
DeleteShe is beautiful and lucky to have you! Great words you sendt her. Keep up the good work. I love to visit you and read your poem.
ReplyDeleteRegards from Tania:-)
Very kind remarks , Tanya! Thanks a ton:)
DeleteCongrats on your 100th post and what a fitting post. Your wife is gorgeous :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for that beautiful comment:)
DeleteAhaaa...your wife is so pretty! :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant poem Sir. My heartfelt congratulations to you on completing a century. =]
So sweet of you, Vinati for that lovely comment! Feels good:)
DeleteCongrats to you wife for having such a noble husband! This poem is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Francesca! Actually I am the lucky one:)
DeleteDear Rahul, congratulations on your 100th post.;) And what a lovely gesture to dedicate it to your wife. There is nothing more important than having the love and support of a significant other.;)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem as well, so romantic.;))
Have a great Sunday evening,
xoxo
Zuzana, The love and support has got me this far, certainly and you are so right:)Hope you had a wonderful weekend!
DeleteForgot to add what a lovely couple you are and your wife is a true beauty.;)
ReplyDeleteA big thanks from both of us :)
DeleteWow! Lovely poem as well as fabulous flow ;)
ReplyDeleteCongrats Sir... that's indeed wonderful poem dedicated to her. Wishing you both all the best.
Thanks Jeevan, for those kind words!
Delete100th post that a milestone.. May you cross many more.. Congratulations! And I loved ur poetry in hindi.. very romantic.. Ur wife is pretty.. surely there is a women behind every successful man .. Wish you both all the happiness in the world :D
ReplyDeleteI do not have enough words to thank you, Single Girl for those beautiful words! In my case what you say is just true:)
Deletecongratulations !!!!
ReplyDeleteI wish I get to see more n more 100s :)
your wife is the most precious gem of your life !!
Jyoti, I have conveyed your beautiful sentiment! It is always a delight to read your poetry and prose! A big thanks:)
DeleteAww....such a beautiful poem! And lovely couple!! Congrats and wish you many happy years together!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Giribala! I consider myself lucky to have found lovely readers and writers like yourself:)
DeleteThanks, Ashwini for that kind remark:)
ReplyDeleteYour wife is so pretty! And the beautiful lines are apt for her!
ReplyDeleteEven you look very dashing Rahulji, lovely couple :-)
Congratulations on the 100th post!
Thanks a lot Jenny for those beautiful words:)
DeleteWow! This one has to be my favorite of all! Such beauty in simplicity.. Such a beautiful moment, I literally had goose bumps reading it through the end.
ReplyDeleteHere's to many more wonderful and joy filled years in both - blogging and personal journey of togetherness as well :):)
Arti, I feel humbled by your words and lavish praise! A big thanks:)
DeleteSuch a lovely, romantic poem!!! Loved it!!! I am not surprised that your Beautiful Wife inspired you... May God Bless you both with all the best things in life!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd hearty congratulations on reaching the milestone (100th post). It is a great achievement and I've discovered the thrill only very recently... May you reach more milestones!
Nisha, what a nice coincidence that you reached the 100th post just last week:) A sincere thanks for those words!
DeleteSo sweet gesture and poem :)
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Welcome to my blog and also to follow it, Jerly! A big thanks and BTW you write very well... goes to show how much I have still to read in this wonderful world of bloggers:)
DeleteCongratulations on hitting a century.I read both versions. Though it took me some time to read the hindi one,I must say that it was truly very romantic. But I suspect there must be more such love-poems in your store na. Anyway,I hope you enjoy more such romantic moments with your beautiful inspiration,your wife :)
ReplyDeleteThat was a beautiful comment Zach! A sincere thanks for following my blog. I give credit to readers like you who push me to write:)
DeleteBahut hi khubsurat rachna .Cheers to the lovely couple.
ReplyDeleteKavita, Yeh aap ki dil ki khoobsurti hai, ki aap ko rachna khoobsurat lagi! A very sincere thanks:)
DeleteAmazing pic.. And am sure, wonderful memories with it too!! :) Made for each other :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Binu! Wonderful memories for sure:)
DeleteBeautifully done ! Translation- innovative idea.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Jagdishji! Thanks a lot for liking the post!
DeleteA lovely smile, wonderful couple, apt poem and a great landmark! Congrats and wish you many more years of happiness both in real life and blogging. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Zephyr for those kind wishes and your appreciation. I have learnt a lot from likes of you and do accept my gratitude for this:)
Deleteyour wife so beautifull,, and apne apni poem mai chandra, surya, megha, hawa , sagar sabhi ko enclose kar lia,, nice..
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ruchi for your sweet comment:) Prakriti ki sundarta ko kuch shabd mein kehna bahut kathin hai:)
DeleteYeh rachna kehti hai ki aapki rachna ati sundar hai :). There are some errors in the Hindi spellings, I noticed :). And, wow your wife is beautiful. Hope the two of you always stay happy and encouraging of each other's pursuits.
ReplyDeleteRachna, Thanks a lot for those lovely words! I am aware that there are some spelling mistakes in Hindi script as I am not too familiar with making this work on computer, for which I apologize:( A sincere thanks again!
ReplyDeletePlease don't apologize. I've noticed the same problem when I try to type in Hindi. They self correct and make the spellings wrong sometimes.
DeleteI loved the poem!! And ur wife is so pretty...the pic of you both on ur wedding is jsut wow!! :) Totally awesome post.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ,Ria for that lovely remark!
Deletevery very romantic poem , Sir ji.. so you been romantic from before you got married he he he he :)
ReplyDeleteand the couple look lovely , made for each other..
Thanks for sharing ..
Bikram's
So difficult to change yourself , Bikram:)Thanks a ton for those nice words
DeleteWhat a lovely tribute to your beautiful wife!
ReplyDeleteAm honored with your comment, LadyFi:)
Deletesuch a sweet post!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Ashok!
DeleteHow wonderful and sweet that you've dedicated this post and endearing poem to your wife! Wishing you both many more years of love and happiness!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Sam for your beautiful comment!
DeleteBeautiful poems. Congratulations on the 100th post and special thanks for sharing those pictures:)
ReplyDeleteI treasure that remark , Saru! No amount of thanks would be enough to you as this journey would not have been possible but for supportive readers/and great writers like you:)
DeleteThat's so kind of you to say, Sir. I came back to read the hindi poem. At times, words can't do justice to what we want to convey. I was touched to that extent by this post.:)
DeleteThanks once, again:)
DeleteWhat a sweet picture and poem to mark the occasion! Congratulations to both of you for this milestone, and wish you many many more to come :) !!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for those lovely words and wishes!
DeleteWow! that's a lovely post! and congratulations!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem and wonderful pictures. You sure are on an nostalgic trip.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Rachna for having liked it!
DeleteThanks a lot, Kusum!
ReplyDeleteI'm late to read this- but better late than never, because this is wonderful!!!!!! HOW SWEET!!!! Your wife is sooo beautiful.
ReplyDeleteProfound thanks for those beautiful comments, Anjuli :)
ReplyDeleteI am surprised I didn't read this post..Such a beautiful poem And your wife is so beautiful :) And congrats on your 100th post :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your sweet comment Natasha
ReplyDeletebeautiful..post and lovely lady :)
Deletethe poem is too good a well deserved tribute I must say!
two of you make an awesome pair :)
..keep rocking!
Natasha thanks a lot for following my blog:)
DeleteNatasha thanks a lot for following my blog:)
DeleteA huge thank you HArman:)
ReplyDeleteThat's a wonderful poem Sir.Your wife is very pretty. :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog and for following too! Thank you Puji for such a sweet comment
DeleteThat is really nice and romantic.
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Thanks a lot, PAPS!
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