After a late night
flight from Delhi to Hong
Kong , I looked around at the terminal and shopping arcade of HKIA bewildered by the
mammoth size! I patiently sat down for the announcement of the departure of the
next flight to Melbourne
which was to leave in next half an hour. After a flurry of activity I boarded
the aircraft for the next leg of journey. I had a window seat and soon a young
girl about twenty years old came and occupied the seat next to mine. Dressed in
a flaming red skirt and a white top, she wore a permanent smile. Her name was
Susan Wong and she resided in Melbourne .
She worked for a travel agency. I was in good company and soon found that the
girl was fond of talking and had endless things to talk about. This was fabulous
as I told her that I would be in Melbourne
for four days and would like to go around seeing the place. She passed me her
business card and said she could help readily. Wow! This was a dream come true! After about nine hours of eating, drinking and
endless chat, the ‘Fasten Seat Belts’ sign came on and we were advised to turn
off all the electronic devices. The dark sky line soon gave way to twinkling of
millions of lights as the beautiful city of Melbourne came into view. It was 'time to visit Melbourne , now'.
Melbourne International Airport |
In a few minutes,
the flight landed at the Melbourne
International Airport .
I gave my hotel address to Susan, which was located opposite the Flinder’s
Street Railway Station in CBD (Central Business District). We agreed to meet at
the hotel reception next day at 9 AM. We
shook hands and parted and I took a taxi which reached the hotel in about forty
minutes. The city was decked like a fairyland and traffic moved smoothly. We
crossed a small bridge on the Yarra river which flows through the city to reach
the hotel. I soon checked into the lovely room and looked out of the window to
admire the lovely Flinder’s Street Railway station across the road where scores
of people were moving in and out.
Flinders Street Railway Station |
I had read an interesting story of how the
design plan of Victoria Terminus( now Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminal, in Mumbai)
and Flinders Street Railway station in Melbourne
had got interchanged. In late 1800s Fredrick W Stevens who was responsible for
the designs got mixed up with Melbourne
station which was in state of Victoria
in Australia, and Victoria Terminus in Mumbai as they had similar names.
Strange, though this fact is still contested.and both have almost identical
design. I soon fell asleep.
I got up with a start
the next day and saw that it was cloudy and likely to rain. I finished my
breakfast and reached the reception. Precisely at 9 AM Susan walked. We sat in the lounge for about half an hour
as she shared the plan for the day. I told Susan that it may be difficult to
spend the day outside due the overcast sky. She grinned and told me ‘Where in
the world would you ever find all the four seasons in one day itself?’ I looked at her with surprise and she then
explained me that one could see a brilliant sunrise with warmth in air and soon
the sky turns cloudy. It rains! By late
evening it gets even darker and a sleet followed with flakes of snow greet you.
Late in the evening the street is covered with a blanket of snow! Amazing is it
not?
The City Circle Tram- Melbourne |
After a while the
weather cleared and she took me towards the maroon brown ‘City Circle tram’ station around the bend.
The tram would take us for a free ride! The
Melbourne City Circle Tram travels a rectangular route along Flinders, Spring,
and La Trobe Streets, then Harbor Esplanade in Docklands — right around the Melbourne city centre.
One can hop on or hop off at any station and then continue the journey by the
next one. Within ten minutes the tram arrived. The seats were comfortable and a
conductor greeted us on board. He kept explaining about the places we passed en
route. We passed by the Aquarium and the Princess theatre, Federation Square and a host of other
interesting places.
My host Susan on Yarra water front |
After , this beautiful trip we got down and walked along
the River Yarra . It is associated with the Gold Rush in mid 1800 when ‘Gold was
discovered in Warrandyte near Yarra . The city of Melbourne grew with the rush of migrants to
settle here.
A
number of people were jogging along the tracks on the River front and the place
was vibrant’I could sense the love for sports in the air in this city!. The sky
had cleared and the dazzling blue water and the manicured green lawns looked
very inviting. I spotted the Melbourne Rowing Club just along the banks and
asked Susan. if I could try a hand at
rowing! She smiled and then took me to the office where I was told that I need
to join a Beginners course lasting 1.5 hours and I should be able to swim at
least 100m. So my desire to row was unfulfilled but it was thrilling to watch
the young well built men ‘Rowing ‘steadily and saw a number of rowing boats as
we walked along the river.
After
lunch, we walked to the Aquarium which is in the heart of the city to see an
array of the stingrays, turtles and other marine creatures. A continent where the
ten most dangerous animals live in the world, like the Taipan snake, Box Jelly
fish, Blue Ringed Octopus, and Red Back Spider. It was a great opportunity to
see the Sharks in glass domed tunnels and go on a tour in the glass bottom boat
to watch the marine life. A truly thrilling experience!
Melbourne Cricket Ground |
Rod Laver Arena |
We returned to the
Flinder’s Street tram station and took Tram No 75 to head to the Melbourne
Cricket Ground , MCG, located in Eastern suburb, via the Wellington Parade. We
passed by the interesting sights of the city to reach the place . The imposing
structure of the stadia was very impressive. On the the other side was the Rod Laver Arena , the mecca of
tennis. A statue of Rod Laver greets you on arrival. My thoughts drifted to the
times when I would hear the commentaries of the games of cricket and tennis
being played at these venues. Little did I know that one day, I would come to
visit them, We were just in time to take a guided tour of the MCG complex which
lasted more than an hour with the guide taking us through the history.It has a
seating capacity of 100000 and was built in 1861. In 1992 it was fully
reconstructed. There are huge TV screens installed for update of the sports
summary.. The Rod Laver arena was closed but we could admire the structure
where the tennis tournaments, swimming championships and even rock concerts are
hosted. One requires a full day to see and appreciate these lovely sporting
venues! . As it was getting late, we took a tram back to the Flinder’s Street
and bid good bye to Susan for a very rewarding day. Before leaving she had told
me to get ready early the next day for some more excitement!
A stunning view at The Great Ocean Road |
Next morning I was
ready by 6 AM and was waiting for Susan when she rushed in and informed me that
she would take me for a long drive to the Great Ocean Road and we would return
by late evening!. I jumped at the offer in excitement. After all, one does not
get an opportunity to travel a distance of 700 km in a day and that too to see
the ‘Great Ocean Road ’.
I was thrilled at the prospect to undertake the longest road journey of my life!
Susan had the valid driving license so rest of the logistics was fairly easy.
We rented a car and took off for the trip! The roads were relatively free from
traffic at Flinders Street as we headed towards Geelong .
We pored over the map and charted the course as follows: Melbourne- Geelong-
Torquay-Lorne -Appolo Bay-Otway National Park-Port Campbell and Twelve Apostles
and return We estimated that the drive would take almost 7 hours ! So we would
reach sometime in the evening as long as captivating sights
do not delay us further!
The road was built by
the soldiers between 1919 and 1932 and is dedicated to the war casualties of
World War I and is the largest war memorial. This road is now included in the
list of Australian Heritage sites.
A cute Koala in its habitat |
The Great Ocean Road is a 2 hour drive from Melbourne with a dual lane highway. From Geelong
onwards the ride along the ocean offers some of the most breathtaking views of
the coastal scenery with enticing giant sea waves giving company. There is a
great variety of flora and fauna interlaced with local culture, history and a
wide variety of wild life ranging from Kangaroos to occasional sighting of
Koalas! There are certain stretches where one can see whales, if lucky! There
are lighthouses and some traditional fishermen villages, shipwreck sites and
maritime museums. It is literally a treasure trove to explore. There are scores
of gourmet seafood restaurants, regional cheese and wine making centers en
route. Wild berries, olives and citrus fruits grow in this region. At the Melba
Gully one can see the glow worms in the dense foliage of rain forest near
Otways, which look like a million twinkling stars descended from heaven. The
rollicking fur seals and dolphins can be sighted in Port Philip Bay .
There are rugged
cliffs, virgin beaches, and dense forests doting the long stretch of the Ocean
road. The Twelve Apostles is a famous scenic spot to savor the panoramic vistas
and sandstone cliff views. The drive was a rewarding experience of unsurpassed
visual beauty and a feast for eyes as we proceeded. After a late lunch we
retraced our journey back to Melbourne .
The street lights had come on and the euphoria of having seen some of the most
captivating sights kept me enthralled!
Hot Air Balloon ride |
The next day, Susan
had told me too be ready before sunrise! This was getting even more exciting
than I had ever imagined. I woke up very early and at 5.30 AM Susan arrived in
her car and took me to The Hilton on the Park, at Clarendon Street . The roads were deserted
as we arrived through the Fitzroy
Gardens ! .A hot air
balloon was getting ready for the flight! Never, had I experienced this before
and for a moment the adrenalin rush took better of me! In 15 minutes we were
airborne and soon heading skywards! The sight was breathtaking. For next one
hour we drifted like a bird with the wings spread out as we kept admiring the
view below! After a lovely breakfast we drove through the Botanical Gardens
with a brief stopover. It has amazing collection of flowers and exotic plants!
The serenity of the place is in sharp contrast to the lively city.
We then went to visit
the Melbourne Museum which as a wide array of
historical artifacts!
The next destination
was the chaotic, multicultural, Queen Victoria
market which is a shopper’s paradise! The market has been in existence for over
125 years and has more than 600 shops selling almost everything! A hot cup of
coffee and some lovely cookies fresh from bakery were invigorating after a busy
day! It had started to get dark, so Susan enquired if I would like to visit a
Casino! This was perfect, as I had not seen one for very long now! We got into
a plush hotel where the crowds in the casino were unbelievable! There were some
very old people too! Obviously cash rich!! I tried a hand at Poker and Black
Jack but just managed to break even!
A lovely day came to a
perfect end!!
Luna Park- St Kilda |
The day of departure
came sooner than what I had expected. I woke up next day to be greeted by my lovely
host Susan after breakfast! She insisted that I must visit, St Kilda beach
which is just about 6 km from the city centre and has several other attractions
like Luna Park
a huge amusement park, the sprawling beach and Palais Theatre with a gigantic
screen and Holy Trinity Church .
It hosts a number of events ranging from St Kilda festival and even a Gay Pride
March annually! I returned back to my
hotel by the evening to take the return flight back home after this amazing holiday ! The courtesy and friendliness of Australians and their immense love for sports and fitness had left a lasting impression.
PS- This is an
imaginary vacation trip to Melbourne
which is a pure fantasy and hopes it come true one day. http://www.visitmelbourne.com/in.
Images Kind courtesy Google
Hey Rahul, that was such a comprehensive tour piece, complete with the picture of your host and all :) If this trip to Melbourne does not win you the prize, nothing will, I'm sure. All the best!
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely comment to read at day break, Zephyr!A huge thanks for those kind words!
DeleteSeems fun.
ReplyDeleteFun all the way Izdiher!
DeleteYour imagination is so real like.
ReplyDeleteMay it come true, all the best :)
Thanks indeed Ghazala for those very kind words:)
DeleteI was confused if this was real.. in my experience, it is next to impossible to get such a lovely host.. but the dream story made a lovely read Rahul.. hope your dream holiday comes true!
ReplyDeleteThanks Padmaja that you liked my imaginary hostess more than a real one:)
DeleteThat was a great way of showcasing what you would love to do if gotten a chance to be in Melbourne! I wish this fantasy piece soon becomes a reality for you. :) All the very best!
ReplyDeleteNeed all your wishes and your Midas touch on this post:)
Delete:-) Rahul!! I actually thought it was an account of your trip. What a twist to the tale at the end! :-) All the best! I do hope you win the Melbourne trip! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteFiction taking better of reality:) A very big thanks Vidya for being so kind!
DeleteWow! This is one of the best travelogues ever!!!! Hope the fantasy becomes reality soon! Good Luck for the contest:)
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Akanksha for those lovely words!
DeleteHey...that's a real detailed post. I could imagine the amount of research done for completing that. Hats off!
ReplyDeleteDo read my post on melbourne too and comment, if you have time:
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Am honored with your comment. Your post too is great!
DeleteWow! it looks a real trip...great research....all the best for the contest.
ReplyDeletethere s something for you: http://meintheblogosphere.blogspot.in/2012/09/the-blog-ribbon-award.html
Thanks a lot Priyaa for the double kindness in words and award! What more can I ask:)
DeleteThat was more of a flight of reality than a flight of fantasy to me, Rahul. I loved your post and all the very best for the contest.
ReplyDeleteSudha I treasure your comment dearly as it come from one of the best travel story writer.Learning from good writers like you still!
DeleteRahul, what a story you wove. And, I thought that you were describing one of your jaunts. I really admire all the posts that I have read in this genre, and I sincerely hope that you get an opportunity to tell us the real tale too. All the best!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachna for that beautiful comment and best wishes:)
Deleteyour posts are so enjoyable!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Ashok!
DeleteThis did not look like fantasy at all! Such vivid description, with very specific details. Excellent post! All the best.
ReplyDeletehttp://lafemmenirvana.blogspot.in/2012/08/vacation-fit-for-god.html
Welcome to my blog! A sincere thanks for that nice comment!
Deletedamn good .....loved the way you have woven the story :) all the best
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Vinisha and am happy you liked:)
DeleteOmigod Rahulji, I never relaised this was all imaginary and a part of the contest! All along I did wonder, how come you are travelling alone here and why not with your wife:-)
ReplyDeleteThe VT statios mix up story, that was amazing! And did you see, there are domes in the picture you have uploaded. Surely that looks so much more Indian isn'it.
And all seasons in a day. oh wow!
And the MCG and rod laver arena, reminds me of the time, when I visited Lords and Wimbledon on the same day in Londond. Tennis and cricket, both a passion in both the cities.
Rahulji, you know what, all along I kepy on thinking of all the points I wanted to mention in the comment, and the last line stating all this is fanatasy is not going to stop me :-)
If I am going to melbourne anyday, this will be my itenary. I only hope I find a Susan though :-) And do I need to mention it?
This is an awesome entry and I hope you do win the tickets :-)
Such a sweet comment, Jenny:) You thought I am on a solo trip with a gorgeous host...:)There is a lot of resemblance in the two stations! London and Melbourne would be probably similar in the respects you mentioned! That is a dream itinerary :)A big thanks !!
DeleteIt is so good to strat the week with one of your traveling stories!
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DeleteAha! I thought it was a real travelogue! Well, it was interesting even if were imaginary.
ReplyDeleteThe difference between real and reel was a thin one in that case:)Thanks a lot, Kusum to have liked this fantasy
Deletewowo wo wowo there is a luna park right at the sydney harbour too, the one i visited :)
ReplyDeleteand this was fiction wonder how it will be to actually do it all .. All the best with the contest .. and now its making me yearn to go to oz again
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I too saw the Luna Park in Sydney!Thanks a lot, Bikram for the nice comment!
DeleteAll this was a fiction ?? unbelievable!! A great imagination :):)
ReplyDeleteAll the best !
A big thanks Ramya for that kind comment!
DeleteHa so funny as for a minute you really got me believing how lucky you are. That is what you call writing.
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Wish me luck, PAPS:)Thank you!
DeleteThe great ocean road is beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteHope you get to see it soon :)
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Welcome to my blog Anisha, and a big thanks for your wishes!
DeleteHi Rahul, I feel that is almost impossible that you haven't been to Melbourne before, wow, your descriptions and narration of the exquisite imagery and the electric city is so real and vivid. You are a truly gifted writer, bringing this city to life from the creative depths of your imagination! I am amazed by this!
ReplyDeleteSam like always what can I say except to thank you profusely for such kind remarks! I dream a lot:)
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DeleteAll seasons in one day! that makes me feel like visiting. I am uncomfortable even in a 2 hour flight that makes me hesitant; but yeah u are so lucky to visit so many places!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jerly for liking it! This was a post on imaginary travel:)
DeleteA wonderful imaginary tour of the great city.. wish you all the best for the contest
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog, Rayyan! Thanks a lot for your kind wishes!
DeleteI got a virtual tour of Melbourne, thanks to your travelogue. Bookmarking it for future reference.
ReplyDeleteOnce you get time after settling down, hope you will see these exotic places,Purba:)Thanks indeed to bookmark!
DeleteVery well written, all the best to you!!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Rama:)
DeleteThis is simply awesome, it feels like I'm in Melbourne right now and I know it!
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DeleteOMG!!! I thought you really went and came and was wondering, how lucky of you to get such a wonderful host...hehee...very detailed and beautiful journey. Good luck to the contest :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Latha for having enjoyed this imaginary journey and your best wishes!
DeleteI really hope you win the contest and if you do, you are going to get back goodies for all of us...:)hehe
DeleteMy sincere thanks once again, Latha and that is a promise:)
DeleteI lost track of time and moment while reading your post.Pretty descriptive,vivid and adventurous.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes !!
Welcome to my blog Amit! Thanks a lot for your kind wishes!
DeleteI for one, would prefer to articulate a comment that is productive to furthering your writing aspirations. To touch upon areas that could help you from hereon to articulate your voluminous research into crisp and progressive narratives....
ReplyDeleteBullet your milestones - so you have a preview of the flow of the narrative, and it wil help you decide how much of the preamble can be cascaded into the individual sections, the size of the pre-amble will also be decided based on the total size of the narrative.
Treat all the senses of the reader - The culinary senses were left untouched, the accommodation, the smell of the Australian air, the colour of the sky were among some of the senses missed by your narrative.
Avoid colloquial usage in narrative - Unless the subject itself merits colloquial usage for pronunciation of emotions, reactions or ambience, avoiding erroneous conversational phrases such as 'Finished my breakfast' are the areas where you start losing grip over the reader's journey into your narrative. The temperature, flavours, variety or aesthetic appeal of the breakfast would have roped in the culinary senses and fetishes of the readers ass well.
The devil in the details - If you had bothered to describe 'Susan' slightly more to the readers, even if it were to be punctuated through each sight-seeing date on your trip, romance is the lowest common denominator in terms of appeal and grip on the reader. A little more hinting of a growing bond, affection or awkwardness would have the readers glued to the story, creating a bated anticipation of some sparks by the end of the trip.
Distinction of thoughts v experiences - The most interesting opportunity to grip readers is when you speak of beneath-the-surface aspects, like your thoughts. Almost all readers relish following the author's thoughts, which would have created room for invoking the readers' fantasies, aspirations or desires releasing Dopamine in their heads, making them fall in love with your story, and installing your story on their hard drives from their RAM space.
Adjectives - The adjective 'Exciting' seems like a filler being used by you in an area where you were able to insinuate adjectives of your narrative skills in the readers' minds by being versatile with the experience adjectives.
Research should gleam through, not be placed on the surface - Your focus on research and hunger to include all your research into the piece is evident from your lack of focus on articulation, the progressives were repetitive, the joinders, welds, and sequences were rough and the transitions, were crude like a draft fact-file, rather than free-flowing prose which visits all the researched and well-appointed tourism experiences in your narrative.
Trimming Research - By drawing a priority table, and placing the main elements of your narrative in them, you are able to prune the not-so-spectacular features, to create enough room for you to describe the best few chosen features in the most vivid manner invoking the visual imagination of the reader through the well-folded words in your phrases.
Re-write till your work turns you on - If the narrative does not turn you on, when you read it with the 3rd person's perspective, re-write till you fall in love with your prose.
Hope this was useful. Cheers!
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DeleteYou should start a travel blog. You have a lot to offer :-).Looking forward to more of your chronicles !
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So kind of you to say so, Stuti. Incidentally I have a travel blog which I now find difficult to update! Thanks a lot!
DeletePlease be more regular.I don't intend to be imposing here, but I really believe you have a lot to share :-)
DeleteStuti, you made my day by asking for this:) I have already mentioned this in my comment to Saru below! I will surely endeavor to do this:)
DeleteRahul, its very bad of you tell us that this was an imaginary trip. Sigh. And here my overactive imagination had conjured all sorts of things: from a holiday romance to first love.
ReplyDeleteI must say that you should start a travel blog or start your novel right now.
Sorry Rachna, I did not give you a chance to be jealous this time:) I will soon head your advice!Thanks a lot for those words!
DeleteWhat a lovely trip - I hope it does come true one day for you!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks for those kind wishes Lady Fi!
DeleteI must say you are a very detailed observer!! Hope this trip becomes a reality soon!! :-)
ReplyDeleteI like to see the world around me with a child like curiosity, still, Radhika:) Thank you Radhika for your best wishes!
DeleteWow! A great perspective on the Melbourne and its so fascinating, Rahul buddy!!
ReplyDeleteLet your dream come true... and along with a pretty host like Susan to give company ;)
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A huge thanks Shilpa for liking this post and your best wishes:)
DeleteRahul..." Un vuelo de la fantasìa "
ReplyDeleteMientras ibe leyendo tambien me imaginaba que iba a producirse
un acercamiento con Susan...màs romàntico.
Quizàs es tu viaje hecho realidad alguien te haga cambiar el rumbo de tu vida...si viajas solo jajaj
¡¡¡ atrapante relato !!!
un beso
Ha Ha Doris! ¿Te gustó este y encontró un nuevo ángulo de romance a esto :)
DeleteImaginary? With all the facts of stations and war memorials, I thought it was real. Too good Sir, I think now I have a lot of gyan on Melbourne. And as Stuti said, I remember you used to write for travel site. Please share any updates with us.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes for the contest Sir.:)
Imaginary yes! for a change Saru:) I managed to con well and had to tell the truth in the end!I have a travel blog which I find difficult to update and readers like you and Stuti make my day by asking for more:) A big thanks for your best wishes!
DeleteIt was as real as writing from your own experience and I couldn’t see it as a bit of imagination! It was so informative on the Melbourne.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes :)
Thanks a lot Jeevan for liking and also for your best wishes:)
DeleteNice post. Hope it will come true. Like you, I really like to visit Melbourne one day.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your best wishes, Eden!
DeleteThanks for your very kind comment, It made my day!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure Sam:)
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DeleteHave a nice weekend, Francesca!
ReplyDeleteA very interesting and informative travelogue!
ReplyDeleteAll the very best for the contest! :)
Thanks a lot Shilpa for devoting time to my blog and your best wishes:)
DeleteThanks a ton Ashwini for those lovely comments!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on winning the contest Sir. I am super happy for you :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Saru for breaking the news:)
DeleteA well deserved win, Rahul. Just came in and read this mind blowing entry. A wonderful armchair tour of historical Melbourne!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Panchali for those kind comments!
DeleteCongrats on a well deserved win! Was a pleasure reading your post earlier, and re-reading it after the results were out!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks and welcome to my blog!I feel great that you read this twice:)
DeleteHad a great time reading this one... congrts for the win!!!
ReplyDeleteA huge thanks Manjulika! Don't forget to read my comment on your FB page:)
DeleteYay Rahul! You won. Congrats on the win. You totally deserved it.
ReplyDeleteA huge thanks Rachna for being so supportive! The best wishes worked, collectively:)
ReplyDeleteYour post is worth reading. You have shared here worthy information and wonderful experience with us. I would like say you thank you so much for great and valuable information.
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