Suhail and
Fatima looked at their new born whose hands were clenched and eyes shut. Their
little bundle of joy, that was born precisely as clock struck 9 AM. The
previous night had been an agonizing one! Fatima was brought to the hospital
for the delivery and the doctors had wheeled her into the labor room
straightaway! The doctors waited patiently as they felt there was no need to
operate and it would be a normal delivery. We shall name him ‘Rehman’ the duo
agreed, as they had tears flowing down their cheeks when they remembered the
name.
‘Rehman
chacha(uncle)’ had lived in a slum in Dahisar in Mumbai, for many years.
Everyone called him by that name regardless of the age as it was difficult to
guess his true age. He was a tall lanky man with a flowing beard and fiery
eyes. He was strong and muscular, had a crease of lines on a big forehead
and would rarely lose temper. He always donned a pathan suit comprising a
flowing kurta and a salwar. No one knew how he earned money but most people
believed that he was a modern day Robinhood. He knew all the goons and the good
men and their secrets. He would mingle with everyone with a great ease and help
those in need. Fatima was his niece and was barely ten year old when her
parents died in a road accident and ‘Rehman’ took over the responsibility of
bringing up the young girl all by himself.
Suhail’s father was a carpenter and had a small shop in the
neighborhood. He had three more children two boys and a girl all younger to
Suhail. With great difficulty he managed to make the two ends meet. Suhail was
fourteen year old and was a brilliant student. Every night he would sit under
the municipal lamp post and open his school bag and continue with his studies
late into night. At home, the big family lived in one room which had a make shift
kitchen. During the day it was a living room with two stools and a sofa and at
night it was converted into a dormitory where the entire family slept. Suhail,
liked Fatima and would help in her studies too!
The time
passed and soon Suhail completed the school and earned an admission in the
local engineering college. He earned a scholarship that helped his father in
rendering financial support. The local tough man Amar Shetty and his goons
collected ‘hafta’( a petty amount- as protection money) from all the business
and shop owners. They raised the amount which the shopkeepers found difficult
to pay so they protested. ‘Rehman Chacha’ one day came across Amar and asked
him to stop his goons as the people were reeling under inflation and unable to
pay. The heated argument soon converted into a fist fight and they came to blows!
Amar, pulled out a knife and attacked Rehman, but he ducked and twisted the arm
of Amar! As Amar lost the balance and fell the blade of the knife ripped through
his stomach! A crowd had gathered and soon the police arrived at the
scene! Rehman was sent to the police
look up. Amar, died due to excessive bleeding, before he could be rushed to the
hospital. Fatima was heartbroken and the tears in her eyes were unending!
Slowly, she came to terms with life and Suhail continued to support her in
every possible way.
Two years
passed and Suhail landed with a job in a company and moved out of the
town! Fatima was very lonely and she too
took a job as a primary school teacher in the neighborhood. One day Suhail
proposed to Fatima, and she agreed to spend the rest of her life with him. They
moved the court and requested that Rehman be allowed to attend their ’Nikah’
(wedding)!
The day
arrived and Suhail dressed in a flowing gown and Fatima in bridal red stood
before the ‘Maulvi’ to solemnize the marriage. As they raised their heads,
their eyes met those of ‘Rehman Chacha’ whose eyes were moist. They both rushed
to seek his blessing and he tenderly hugged them. His hands were still in cuffs
and the policemen asked him to start moving to the jeep waiting for return to
the jail. It started to drizzle, and as Rehman looked up towards the sky to
thank ‘Allah’, he suffered a massive heart attack and fell. All hell broke loose! The policemen rushed
but to no avail, as Rehman had breathed his last!
What a powerful and moving story!
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ReplyDeleteLike watching a little telefilm ..... touching story.
ReplyDeleteThanks indeed for that lovely comment:)
DeleteVery gripping story and wonderful narration!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shilpa, that you liked it!
DeleteHe died a happy man.. God is great
ReplyDeletebeautiful touching story and god bless suhail and Fatima ..
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Thanks Bikramm! Yes he died a happy and content man!
DeleteA beautiful story. I really cannot define the ending, is it happy or sad. But there is something of a closure here. Rehman chacha is gone, but they have the fond memories, and yes he still lives with them as thier new born son. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Jenny! Am very happy you liked the story:)
DeleteBeautiful story. Very emotional.
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DeleteNice characterisation of Rehman!
ReplyDeleteThanks Indu for liking the character:)
DeletePower-packed! Loved the narration :) Some ends are new beginnings...
ReplyDeleteTrue Akanksha! Well said.. some ends are new begining:)
DeleteNice story...loved it...!!!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog, Anjan! Thanks indeed!
Deletesmall beautiful story. touching narration. I loved reading it. I could imagine the scenes in front of my eyes.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Latha for your nice comment!
DeleteThis was a heart-warming and touching tale, beautiful and sad too...I liked the conclusion where Rehman got to see Fatima live out her dreams of being happily married before he passed on, it was all he probably ever wanted for her. Their memory of him and his benevolent nature will always be present in their son, thats a a very endearing tribute. Well penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam that you enjoyed this simple tale of love and benevolence!
DeleteThis is such a touching story. You have a great way of writing.
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Very nice to see you back after a while Gina! Thanks a lot!
Deleteshort captivating story that will linger in our mind for a longer time...SUPERB...GOD LOVE U
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Adhi and a huge thanks for following it too!My sincere thanks!
DeleteVery touching and gripping story. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA huge thanks Kavita and good to see you again!
DeleteYou brought the scenes alive like a movie, the characters seem real!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Padmaja for having liked the tale!
Deletelight and crisp story.. beautifully written !
ReplyDeleteA sincere thanks Ramya for your nice comment!
DeleteBeautiful and heartfelt! The goodness of Rehman Chacha will always remain alive.
ReplyDeleteAm really happy you liked , Arti!A big thank you:)
DeletePowerful story sir! Felt like poetic justice to Rehman chacha from the almighty above. :)
ReplyDeleteWell said Binu, poetic justice indeed. Thanks a lot!
Deletebeautiful story...
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Thanks a lot Krishna!
DeletePerson like Rehman chacha make this world a place worth living and fighting for :)
ReplyDeleteVery true Jyoti! Absolutely right:) A big thanks to you for following my blog!
DeleteA very beautiful story, Rahul. People like Rehman chacha make the world a lovely place. Missed your posts during my holidays.
ReplyDeleteNice to see you back with those ever encouraging remarks:) Missed your posts as well:)Hope you had a lovely time!!
Deletean amazing narration
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Welcome to my blog!Thanks a lot!!
DeleteWow such a lovely story. Such a true happening around here too.
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Thanks PAPS that you liked:)
DeleteThanks for your comment.... Happy Friday!
ReplyDeleteWishing you a happy weekend, Sam!
DeleteThat was a very nice story, a warm one.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rachna:)
DeleteJust lovely!
ReplyDeleteHope you have a blessed time in your part of the world:-)
Wishing you good times too, Tanya:) Thanks!
DeleteRahman dies because he feels he has served his purpose in life?
ReplyDeleteEvery end is the start of a new begining! Thank you Purba:)
DeleteWonderfully created the story... the rear part was touching!
ReplyDeleteCongrats :)
Thanks a lot, Jeevan!
Deletebeautiful story and suitable pic. also u selected.well done....
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog! Thanks a lot for that nice comment!
DeleteGood one, love to read post like this :)
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Shreya:)
DeleteGreat story! Well written.
ReplyDeleteAm happy you liked , Eden! Thank you:)
DeleteLovely story...so simple and so beautifully penned! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Puji! Am happy you liked it!
DeleteWhat a touching story... As always very well written Mr. Rahul!
ReplyDeleteThanks indeed, Radhika for ever being so kind:)
DeleteDear Rahul, one can sense from your words how much you enjoy writing and you have a talent of conveying your imagination and your emotions beautifully.
ReplyDeleteA lovely story.;)
Have a great week ahead,
xoxo
Thank you Zuzana for that very kind comment!It is satisfying to see that you read with delight what I wrote!
DeleteA bittersweet ending. You are trying a hand at all kinds of stories, aren't you? :) Nice one.:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Divya! You guessed it right, I am trying a hand at new things to add a bit of spice to writing:)
DeleteIs it a true story Rahul?
ReplyDeleteThis one is just fiction, Agnes:)
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