‘
The Crossroads’ : My entry for the Get Published contest’
A teaser of the story:
Nek Chand who was a deeply religious man had just come out of his small house near Burrabazar (the Big Market), when he saw a group of about eight youth all in their twenty’s brandishing swords and iron rods. Seeing a vermilion ‘tilak’ on his forehead, one of the youth shouted’ Kill the bastard!’
There was no time to react. Before Nek Chand could shout, a sword had pierced his heart and he lay motionless on the ground in a pool of blood. Sudhir, his son stood transfixed in horror at the sight of what he just saw as he peered from the window. He shouted ‘Amma come quickly, they have killed pa!’
One shout of Sudhir, had brought Mamta’s world crashing around her. She rushed out to see the horrible sight which she could never have imagined even in her worst dream. Nek Chand lay motionless in a pool of blood as the crowd ran in the opposite direction. Mamta fell on the ground and tried to feel the pulse as she cried incessantly. The hand was still warm but the body was lifeless.
This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get
Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.
PS : Image kind courtesy Google
If you like the story idea kindly promote at the Promotional link: http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/378
If you like the story idea kindly promote at the Promotional link: http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/378
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ReplyDeletegud luck..:)
Thanks a ton, Jemina:)
DeleteI enjoyed the outline but is this a real story? That is one of the conditions of the contest.
ReplyDeleteIs it Amit? The line dividing the fiction from fact i a thin one.Thank you for liking!
Deletegood luck!! I hope you get published!!!!
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A sincere thank for following my blog! Wishing you a very Happy New Year too:)
DeleteExcellent Excellent if the trailer is like this how will the picture be :) Its very gripping and loved it completely Rahul sir, Cant wait for more. Good luck this is sure shot winner entry! :) all the bestttttttttttttttttt
ReplyDeleteA hugh thanks, Ramya for those beautiful comments and am grateful for the confidence in my writing:)
DeleteSounds very interesting. Best wishes!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rama for your kind wishes:)
DeleteLooks like a real story, very well narrated! All the best!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you and your family, Rahulji!
A big thanks for your nice comment Sandhya! Wishing you and your family a Happy New Year too!!
DeleteHey Rahul, Have always enjoyed your writing. Short but yet full of impact. My best wishes for the contest and a happy new year.
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Brijesh for your ever supportive words!I too wish you a Very Happy New Year!
DeleteThis sure sounds very interesting! All the very best for the contest, Mr Bhatia :) And a very happy 2013 to you and your family! :)
ReplyDeleteComing from you it means so much, Shilpa!A big thanks annd best wishes to you and your family for the New Year too:)
DeleteThe teaser has actually done it's job sir. Wonderful! You have teased your readers to wait for the story to unfold :)
ReplyDeleteVery kind of you Binu and hope the story sees the light of the day:)
DeleteAll the best sir.. lovely narration ..
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Thanks a ton Bikram for your support!
DeleteAs one of your biggest fan, I am very optimistic that it will make it. :)
ReplyDeleteSaru I wish your words come true. I do not have enough words to thank you for the rock solid support to my writing endeavors:)
DeleteHappy new year..have a rocking year ahead..god bless U..
ReplyDeleteWishing you a fantastic New Year too, Ruchi and stay blessed!
DeleteFascinating, Rahul. At this rate HC could easily publish two books. Wish you all the best in 2013. A definite tick on that red heart from me.
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What a great teaser! Good luck with your entry.
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DeleteGood luck, Rahul!
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Thanks Eden! Best wishes to you and family too for the New Year!
DeleteHi Rahul.. Wishing you a very Happy 2013! May it bring you everything you hope for...and more, a world of success, property, happiness and good luck! All the best with this, it is the makings of a great novel!
ReplyDeleteThat was a lot of good things you wished for me Sam and I just reciprocate you in the double measure:)I am indeed lucky to have readers like you who are so encouraging in my writing endeavors!
DeleteThanks for your constant support and motivation all through 2012. it was a great getting to know more about your travels and literary talents through your blog.
DeleteThanks Sam! I too feel just the same way:)
DeleteRahul, you are such an excellent story teller. That book is long overdue, I tell you! Please write it! :D
ReplyDeleteVidya, I bow to thee for those words of praise and I am taking baby steps in the direction you have indicated! A big thanks!!
DeleteYou are such a talented person. your pursuit can't be limited within words.
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Wow! So much praise!! You made my New Year and I too reciprocate the best wishes in equal measure:)
DeleteAnd it sounds so promising! All the best for the contest.
ReplyDeletePurba, I am so happy to get this comment from the reigning blog queen! A huge thanks and I wish I can live up to the challenge!!
DeleteNice story idea. All the best!
ReplyDeleteA sincere thanks Rachna for your kind wishes! I wish I could soon read your posts, which I am missing:(
DeleteThanks ! Wish you a happy New Year too:)
ReplyDeleteWish you a happy new year Rahul sir! Gripping teaser, awating the book now. All the best for the contest!
ReplyDeleteWhat a pleasent surprize to see you back Jenny!! Wish you and your family a lot of happiness in the New Year and a big thanks for being so supportive!!Hope to see you return on blog world soon!!
DeleteWould definitely love to read it in entirety..
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Sir !!
Thanks a lot Jyoti and hope this story gets told:) Best wishes to you as well for the New Year and beyond!
DeleteSuspense! Would like to read the climax :)
ReplyDeleteUnveil of suspense, hope not too far, Kusum:)
DeleteSir, I enjoyed the teaser and would love to read the whole of it...
ReplyDeleteLots of characters to look out for, its not just restricted to the protagonists..
Ha,Ha, Manjulika, what is life without complexities and so also a story awating to be told! Thanks a lot:)
DeleteWould love to read more...Happy New Year Rahulji!
ReplyDeleteGood to see you back in the New Year, Ria and hope this story crosses the initial barrier:)Happy New Year to you and family!
DeleteEnjoyed the teaser, Rahul. Am glad that you are finally taking publishing and writing more seriously. Good luck with your entry.
ReplyDeleteI am following your advise seriously, Rachna now on:) Thanks for those nice encouraging words!
DeleteTeaser sounds realistic and interesting! Voted for you :)
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Thanks a lot, Valli:)Wishing you a very Happy New Year too!!
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DeleteAll the very best Mr. Bhatia. I'm eager to read the whole story. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Divya:) Will try to rise to the expectation!
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DeleteA big thanks Ashwinifor your best wishes! Hope that the story sees the light of the day:)
ReplyDeleteThat sounds very intriguing. But I thought it was to be a love story? All the best. Have voted for you :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Zephyr! A love story would need a backdrop and also a few nail biting moments, is'nt it:)
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