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Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Her Lips


The tender luscious lovely lips

    Like fresh rose buds snipped

They curl in unison for a kiss

   Leave tinges of a heavenly bliss

Babies cry when they miss

  A mother’s touch of lips caress

The maiden’s lips can light a fire

  Sending currents of strong desire
PS: Picture kind courtesy Google

75 comments:

  1. Offoo...is this for any contest?..cute little poem..

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    1. Thanks Latha:) No this not for contest!

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    1. Ha Ha.. you liked it, Francesca! Thanks.

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  3. Oooh! that's nicely put together. :)

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  4. This is such a lovely poem with a beautiful feminine inspiration tied to it. Thank you for taking the time to visit, you're always so thoughtful!

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    1. Happy you liked this one Sam! Thanks a lot!

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    2. Thanks for your kind visit....Have a lovely weekend!

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  5. Rahul,this is really short n sweet !

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  6. Ah! Lovely and an apt picture to go with it. :)

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    1. A huge thanks Arti for liking both the pic n the poem!

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  7. Wonderful poem sir! And the pic too :)

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  8. :) I remembered that lip gloss ad which told that so many things you do with those beautiful lips so do take care of them ;)....
    Very sensuous poem and pic ads the fire to it!

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    1. Ha ha ... managed to ignite the fire and bring back memories of the ad, Ramya!

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    1. Thanks a ton, Akanksha for liking this!

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  10. What a cute poem Rahul. If I didn't know better (you are happily married), I would say you are in love ;)

    Btw..love the lipstick colour.

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    1. That was such a nice comment Rachna! Perpetually in love is it:)Thanks for the choice of color!!

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  11. Forgot to say, perhaps this is an ode to your wife :)

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    1. Bang on! Pangs of prolonged separation... ha ha...:)

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  12. A lovely poem and image dear Rahul.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. This poem defines this blissful feeling. Beautiful!

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  14. A big thanks Saru!! Any poem appreciated by you inspires to write more:)

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  15. Very sensual and evocative, I too find the lips to be the most appealing part of a face, more than eyes. As they can express so much physical love.;)
    xoxo

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  16. You missed something...the lovely, affectionate words coming out of the beautiful lips! So, you are missing your wife?! Enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, Rahulji!

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    1. So agree with you Sandhya!Yeah am on a prolonged tour!!Thanks a lot for those nice words!

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  17. Wow. That's hot stuff Rahul Ji. Indeed you set the readers minds ablaze !

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    1. Thanks a lot Mr Chowla, for that kind comment!

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    1. Ha ha... enjoyed lighting the fire:)

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  20. A Mother's touch. Definitely. Nice poem :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashwini!BTW your new profile pic is nice!

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  21. Whoa! Every single line is so meaningful. :)

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    1. It was indeed nice that you liked the poem, Shreya! Thanks a lot!

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  22. Those lips do look like rose petals; apt words in poetry to it :)

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    1. You could make the match of looks Jerly! How nice:) Thanks a lot!

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  23. Very sweet poem!! Beautifully written :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Valli! Very hapy you liked it:)

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  24. haha... lighting fire :) can't stop laughing at those lines :)
    good one :)

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    1. They sure can light a fire Ramya:) Thanks for liking!

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  25. Lovely poem.. different feelings in each line! complementing image :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Kitty! Am happy you liked it:)

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  26. unexpected topic :) really done wonderful job!

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  27. Expect the unexpected sometimes:) Thanks that you enjoyed Sowmya

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