The journey had been very tiring for Col Shekhar who limped
as he walked on the Chennai station as the train entered the crowded platform.
His misty eyes spotted Aishwarya and his daughter, Priya standing in wait for
him. Her silver hair fluttered and Priya had grown into a young maiden,
resembling the beauty of yesteryears of her mother! How the time had flown!
His
thoughts drifted back in time!
Ravi was traveling from Ahmedabad to Chennai by Navjeevan
Express. The train had left the previous morning where a few of his friends
from army and a school friend who was studying at the IIM had come to see him
off. Capt Ravi Shekhar of Indian Army had completed a three year stint at
Ahmedabad and was on transfer to Chennai and was due to take charge in the next
week. He had been among the most eligible bachelors and was tall lanky and had an
athletic built. He had slept well in the first class compartment and the co-
passengers occupying the berths next to his had disembarked at Warangal in
early morning hours. The commotion created had woken him up from the deep
slumber. He looked at the watch and it was almost 9 AM in the morning as the
train slowly pulled into the platform at Vijaywada junction. It was crowded
with passengers and vendors! As the train halted, a middle aged man and his wife
boarded the compartment. Following them was a bewitching beauty, which was
holding a small suit case and guided the couple, presumably her parents. They
settled into the berths which were vacant .Ravi bought coffee from the platform
and glanced at the family and found that the elderly couple was engaged in a
conversation while the girl who was sitting on the adjoining seat was flipping
through the pages of a magazine. She was about 20 years old and was draped in a
blue color kurta with a white churidar. A small tuft of hair kept falling from
her forehead towards her face every now and then as if playing with her rose
colored cheeks! A small trinket shone from the corner of her ear!
After, finishing coffee Ravi struck a conversation with the
elderly man and learnt that the family was heading to Chennai and their
daughter, Aishwarya was accompanying them.
He looked at Aishwarya and asked her, ‘Are you studying?‘I have just finished my graduation, and am going for holidays to spend time in Chennai’ she replied. Aishwarya was a voracious talker and soon Ravi was engaged in a tete-a tete with the pretty damsel. Ravi was enjoying the conversation and asked her about her interests and asked if she would like to play a game of ‘Scrabble’ with him. She was game and soon both of them were bent over the board to test their prowess.
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In the following months both Shekhar and Aishwarya met
few times before, Shekhar proposed to Aishwarya. Initially there was an
opposition due to different family backgrounds, the parents of Aishwarya agreed
as they found Shekhar to be a caring man with no demands! Six months later,
they tied a knot.
Two years later Priya
was born and the war broke out! Shekhar was called for the emergency and on one
fateful night when rockets were blazing the sky he felt sharp tinges of pain
in his leg as he passed out and there was darkness all around. When he woke up, he found his leg bandaged
and a hospital bed where he lay! He was then moved into a prison where the life
played hide and seek and he remained isolated with the rest of the world for
many years!
Aishwarya got the message that her husband was missing in
action and the long wait started! She raised Priya and each day agonizingly
waited for Shekhar to return!
One day, Shekhar was marched into the prison ward and was
handed over his clothing and money and exchanged with other soldiers on the
border! He could not believe that he was once again able to breathe in fresh air! He was finally free! For the next three days he ran from pillar to post
before boarding a train to Chennai once he learnt about the whereabouts of his
family! The train came to a halt and as he stepped out on the platform he was
mobbed by his wife and daughter with an unending stream of tears marking
the beginning of yet another Platinum Day of Love in their lives!
PS: 1.Written for ‘Platinum Day of Love’ contest sponsored by Indiblogger
and Precious Platinum(Platinum Day of Love)
2. Picture kind courtesy Facebook
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DeleteRespect for men in uniform who sacrifice their life and dreams for the sake of our country.
ReplyDeleteThanks Purba, for liking the story ! There are many men who have made big sacrifices and they do deserve all our respect!
DeleteBeautifully written Rahul . Wish you all the best for the contest ! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Pallavi! Happy you liked it!
DeleteIts wonderful how you focus on every small detail, the lone years in the jail, meanwhile aishwarya raising her daughter alone, the normal cloths when stepping out of prison in far off nation for years, the joy of meeting, the pain of separating, the courage of fighting and the strength to struggle,...Its amazing how to pull everything together and present it in such beautiful manner...:)
ReplyDeleteA big thanks, Jemina for having related to the story so well and analysed so beautifully:) Am so happy to have a reader like you:)
DeleteA happy ending in deed. Hats off to all the men who sacrifice their lives for the nation.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Latha and so many men like these deserve all our respect and gratitude:)
DeleteBeautiful story.Choice of words is as always amazing.Best wishes for contest.This one surely deserves to win :)
ReplyDeleteBTW I have completed 195 posts already.I remember i requested a blog post.Kindly please revert back on sunakshi.25@gmail.com if you're still willing to contribute.I had to delete facebook because of some reasons. :)
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DeleteWhat a beautiful story! Hats off to the men in uniform.
ReplyDeleteGood luck for the contest, Mr Bhatia :)
Shilpa, many many thanks for that heart felt sentiment for the men in uniform!
DeleteWhat a beautiful story Rahul. I adore love stories about men in uniform, especially with happy endings. Good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeleteA huge thanks Rachna and it feels good to know that there are still some people who love the uniform and tales around their lives:)
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DeleteWish you a very Happy Diwali too, Rachna:)
DeleteBeautiful story!!!! :-)
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DeleteLovely positive story, good luck with the contest!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Padmaja for having liked!
DeleteWhat a wonderful story!! So passionate, so sweet and so profound. It touched the very chord of the heart. Perfect for the contest. Good luck, Rahul.
ReplyDeleteIt feels so good that the story could strike the right chord, Ushaji! A heartfelt thanks for those words!
DeleteI am wondering as to why I haven't visited your page earlier. Wonderful story Rahulji. :)
ReplyDeleteIt is a delight to see you here ,Pooja and thanks a lot for your kind comment! You have a lovely blog too!
DeleteWonderfully written. All the best for the contest.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jas for your kind appreciation:)
DeleteA wonderfully written story. Such a story can be scripted into a blockbuster movie. Good luck, Sir.
ReplyDeleteSaru, thanks a lot for that real peppy comment:)
DeleteBeautiful story. It 's nice that objective writing is at the beginning and getting into love. I was relieved at happy end.
ReplyDeleteGood luck, Rahul.
Thanks Sarah! Most of us like happy endings:)
ReplyDeleteVery touching and heart warming. Beautifully penned Rahul Ji !
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Rama and best wishes for Diwali to you and family:)
DeleteNice story sir.. Respect the men in uniform! Its because of their selfless sacrifice that we are what we are...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Binu for having liked the story!
DeleteBeautiful story. I like to read things like this. And love is forever!
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Everyone likes love stories, Camila and thanks a lot for that sweet comment! Best wishes for Halloween:)
DeleteBeautifully written Mr. Rahul.. really enjoyed reading this!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Radhika! Happy Diwali:)
DeleteThis is a beautiful love story that truly did last the test and trails of time. In this day & age, its something thats quite difficult to find but your story tells of new hope, everlasting love and with patience and resilience, a happy ending can be guaranteed. Wonderful read!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sam and am happy you liked the story!
DeleteHope you had a wonderful and memorable Diwali!
DeleteThanks Sam! Memorable one indeed:)
DeleteBeautifully written story, and so romantic too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rama! Wish you and your family a Happy Diwali!
DeleteLoved the way the romance started. Being a prisoner of war must be hell. Wonder what makes people so inhumane, hardened and indifferent that they take pleasure in torturing another human being, both physically and mentally, just because they feel they can.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot KayEM! Life could be really hard for some but to face it with courage makes the difference:) Happy Diwali to you and your family!
DeleteI wish we lived in a world where soldiers were not required.
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True! We all wish for peace and a strife free world, Amit!
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I too always hope that there are happy endings, Asamptha:)
Delete<3 Romantic and good ending! I hope you have good luck in that contest!
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DeleteBeautiful and touching story! I enjoyed reading this :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest :) :)
Thanks a lot Valli! Best wishes for the festive time:)
DeleteI often struggle to find the right word to thank you Ashwini, for such nice comments! Am lucky to have readers like you:)
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ReplyDeleteDo you always write storys like this? I'm reading your old posts...
I like to write a lot, but I don't have many time :/
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Hi Camila! Thanks a lot for reading my posts!I am happy you enjoyed the stories:) When it comes to time, we all are struggling for it to do so many things!Have a lovey time !
DeleteStories of soldiers reuniting with their families are always so sweet and very touching. And you have written it so beautifully. I bet writing this piece was kinda nostalgic too :)
ReplyDeleteNice to see you back Divya and am happy that you liked the story! What you say is right about the nostalgia sweeping my mind when I wrote this one:)
DeleteI have nominated your blog for the prestigious 'Liebster Award'. Kindly go through my post, Liebster Award dated 7.11.2013 for the rules. Congratulations, Rahul.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ushaji for the honor bestowed!
ReplyDeleteHeartwarming! Loved the story. Crisp narration, as always! Good Luck for the contest! I really hope you win :)
ReplyDeleteSo good to read a nice comment like yours Akanksha, as always:)Hope you are enjoying your stay and a big thanks for your best wishes!
DeleteA poignant love story. Somehow reminded me of the movie Veer Zara. Good Luck Rahul.
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Alka for your kind comment and best wishes:)
DeleteSuch a lovely story, Rahul! Wish you all the very best. Does the story have any shades from your real life?
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rachna for your best wishes! The story has no shade of my previous life but now that you hinted may be I should write one:)
DeleteThanks a lot Sunakshi for the awards . Am honored:)
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely read and well narrated! Best wishes for the contest :)
ReplyDeleteThanksa lot Uma for your kind wishes and am happy you liked :)
DeleteI love happy ending stories...
ReplyDeleteThe picture hooked me at the start and I was reminded of the movie Border...
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DeleteStory full of love and pride. Best of luck! :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog Pankti, and thanks a lot for your kind comment!
DeleteI am late here, Rahulji! Loved the narration of the story! God bless men in uniform. We are nowhere without them!
ReplyDeleteIt is never to late Sandhya and this space always cherishes the nice comments from you:) A big thanks!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ,Vinati for having liked and your best wishes:)
DeleteThanks for your kind words and great insight, hope you have had a fruitful week!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam and wish you a lovely week ahead!
DeleteWonderful that you wove the life of the armed forces into this one. Really a sweet love story
ReplyDeleteA big thanks for liking and those kind words!
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ReplyDeleteThanks a ton once again for sharing it with us.Looking forward to your response if i did justice to it in presenting the same. :)
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DeleteBeautifully woven story! Best wishes for the contest!
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