lovely.but try putting 'to be' before 'forever.'check if it sounds better. :)
I again came across a beautiful 4 liner :)Sir, its really nice !!Take care.
4 lines talk a lot! :) nice one
It's so full of love, love the rhyming and the thought. Third line is my favorite. Beautiful :)Saru
Heart touching composition ....Very Nice...
Subhan Allah :)
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The promise of the unknown is always exciting.
Unknown is always exciting- agree with you, Purba!
waah :) the new look :D way to go...i love it.
Eyes ! The most intoxicating indeed ..A good string of words
Lovely..four very beautiful lines..
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Love this! Four lines of sheer beauty & rhyme :)
These are good lines...they say a lot...in a simple way.. :)
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