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Wednesday, October 12, 2011

The Strange Twins


It's said that twins are always akin,
  Neil & Nikki had a matching skin
 Even the blue color of eyes was akin
      He was strong, she frail n thin
 This is where dissimilarity begins
He ate like a hog, she survived on skins
 She persevered while he easily gave in
      They were the most  unusual twins
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19 comments:

  1. CяystalOctober 12, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    Ahhh! Intriguing.
    Read "A River" by Ramanujan. It has a rather good reference to twins.

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  2. its me!!! sharan :)October 12, 2011 at 2:17 PM

    I have heard that, in most of the cases twins act opposite.


    PS: perhaps i could not understand what you are trying to say, i am weak at deciphering poetry :(

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  3. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    Very descriptive however I felt there should have been more. :D

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  4. Saru SinghalOctober 12, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    Quite an interesting and playful narration...Enjoyed it...

    Saru

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  5. MadhulikaOctober 12, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    My x Boy friend was a twin... so I guess I have an idea ;) ;)
    and trust me.... twins are totally different... :P

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  6. ArtiOctober 13, 2011 at 6:34 AM

    I Have heard that when one twin has fever the other one gets it too!! But I dont know how true it is...
    Nice poetry, well written.

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  7. Rahul BhatiaOctober 13, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    @Crystal- Will try to read the book mentioned by you!
    @Sharan- You have read it that makes me feel happy!
    @Aasiyah- I find your analysis so good that it makes me work harder to improve!
    @Saru-Thank You for your appreciation!
    @Madhulika- So my figment of imagination is true!! Thanks a lot
    @Arti- Thanks, Arti for liking .I too heard the same...

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  8. UnknownOctober 13, 2011 at 9:09 AM

    because literature does not only state what exists...it also liberates... it offers something you've never seen before, or felt before.

    i can describe lovers and friends, but why? that is the question. :)

    but i should say the description is good na.

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  9. TomokoOctober 13, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    Hello,Rahul.
    Thank you for visitting Green Tomato and leaving a kind comment.I have not been to India. But my brother frequently visited your country on his business. He loved Myanmar and India very much.
    Red rose.

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  10. AnonymousOctober 13, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    never read a twin poem :D

    i like this rahul ji, is it about your children?

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  11. Rahul BhatiaOctober 13, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    @ Aasiyah- Thanks again !Await your narration of friends n lovers.
    @Red Rose- Thanks a lot for visiting my blog! Am touched with your comment of your brother's love for India. You too must visit sometime!
    @Chintan-The BB- Thanks for liking! What a cute question!! I have only a daughter and no twins :):)

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  12. AnonymousOctober 13, 2011 at 10:13 PM

    first ever read an intrigued poem about twins... nice read

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  13. Rahul BhatiaOctober 14, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    Trupty- Thanks for liking!

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  14. AnonymousOctober 15, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    Good poem! Some twins are very similar - others are as opposite as possible.

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  15. Rahul BhatiaOctober 16, 2011 at 4:54 AM

    @Ladyfi-Thanks for visiting my blog and liking the poem!

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  16. smiling soulOctober 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    wow! this is different! fabulous one..:)

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  17. smiling soulOctober 16, 2011 at 10:48 AM

    wow! this is different! fabulous one..:)

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  18. Rahul BhatiaOctober 16, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    Thank you Sowmya!

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  19. Genie @ Healthy Living NowOctober 21, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    Love it! Again :)

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