The world as seen by my eye
Craved from childhood, life less ordinary
Thirst for unseen, spirits soaring high
Roving deep oceans, touching mountains high
Walking in jungles, conquering blue sky
Is the story of my life!
Once in glittering uniform,
Another time without a tie
Traveled uninhibited Mathura to Melbourne
Is the story of my life!
Simpleton at heart, unending zest for life
Enjoy nature’s ornate slice of tangy spice
Cry for the fallen heroes, Laugh till misty eye
This is the story of my life!!
what a GREAT piece!!! I love it- it captures the 'story of your life' beautifully.
ReplyDeleteA great poem and nothing ordinary about your life; the story so far is exciting.
ReplyDeletexoxoxo ♡
"Roving deep oceans, touching mountains high
ReplyDeleteWalking in jungles, conquering blue sky"
A divine and *beautiful* story of your life thus far!! :)
An inspiring and rather beautiful story! Loved the lines :
ReplyDelete** Once in glittering uniform,
Another time without a tie
Traveled uninhibited Mathura to Melbourne
New York to Nile truly vagabond style
Inspired me and also made me smile :)
I respect people in the forces more today, sir!
Beautiful lines. Every line is so nicely framed with feelings and experiences. Great read. You always teach me the new way to write poems. Loved it. God bless :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem!.Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLovely weave...I guess you are a travel freak? is it true?
ReplyDeleteAdventurous and spirited :)
ReplyDeleteLoved how you weaved it :)
I like it.. especially touching mountain high:-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted words! =)
ReplyDeleteRahul ji, *Respect and Salute*
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed beautifully... you write so effortlessly.... really some great words :) :)
ReplyDeleteWow.... Beautifully Crafted :)
ReplyDeletewow!
ReplyDeletenice :)
A beautiful way to describe your amazing life!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing. Really. Hope to see more of your work soon.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDelete@ Anjuli- Thanks a lot for your generous praise!
ReplyDelete@ Dianne- Thanks for the kind words!
@ Lady Fiona- Thanks for the very nice remarks!
@ Crystal- Your remark made my day as the life in armed forces is a difficult one and as long as we have people like you standing in support it makes a world of difference!Thanks for your sweet remarks!
@ Shreya- Thanks a ton for the kind appreciation! You are yourself a very good writer...
@ Eden- Am grateful to you for having liked it!
@ Alka- So good to see you appreciating my attempt at poetry!Yes I am foot loose and love to travel at the first opportunity!
@ PhilO- Thanks for liking!Your story keeps me wanting for more:)
@ Spiderdama- You are an adventurous one who goes around so I think the appreciation is mutual.. :)
@ Vinati- Welcome to my blog and thanks a lot for liking this one!
@ The BB- Chintan- I bow to thee for such an honor!
@ Purvi- So nice to see that kind remark from you! Your blog too is an enjoyable one and like to read what you have to say..
@ Madhulika- Good to see you back! Thank you for that sweet comment!
@ AS- Thanks for liking!
@ Francesca R- Thanks for your kind remarks and am happy you liked it..
@ The Hopeless Romantic- Welcome to my blog and thanks for liking
@ Luar- So sweet! Thanks
Brilliant piece of writing. Very beautifully you have portrayed your life in amazing way.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Babli, for liking this and your kind appreciation!
ReplyDeletejust Awesome !!
ReplyDeletea long, vivid journey narrated so well :)
The stort of your life sounds very beautiful. I would like to have a beautiful story to tell like this someday :-) And I absolutely love travelling,except I have not gotten time to do so in a long while.
ReplyDeleteThis was so lovely.
@ Jyoti-Thanks a lot for your appreciation!
ReplyDelete@Antara4ever- Am elated with those beautiful remarks.. May you see many more places and look back with delight!
wow.. lovely one.. enjoyed every words of it... ur journey is great...
ReplyDeleteKalai- Thanks a lot for enjoying the journey of my life:)
ReplyDeletesimply beautiful ! liked the inner rhythem of the poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kitty for your sweet comment!
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