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Thursday, December 1, 2011

The Dance of Nature



The ebb and swell of ocean tide
     Rising sun makes moon hide
At twilight the day meets night
    Twinkling stars wink n enchant
Rivers surge mountains with might
  Gurgling streams embrace them tight
Thunder and lightning scream n wry
   Colorful rainbows adorn the sky
Chirping nightingales and robins fly
    Dappled butterflies peck rosebuds sly
We watch this dance of nature
    Awed, bewildered, in recurrent delight


PS Image kind courtesy from Google
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35 comments:

  1. ShreyaDecember 1, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Beautiful set of words, Sir. Loved this nature verse. Reminds me sort of "Wordsworth". :) Good one :)

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  2. ArtiDecember 1, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    So beautiful! I can imagine all... Really delightful :)

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  3. RiàDecember 1, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Thats so beautifully written.

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  4. ArtDecember 1, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    That was lovely Written!
    Have a nice day!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 1, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Beautifully written Rahul ji :)

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  6. LipsyDecember 1, 2011 at 7:06 PM

    Beautifully woven words....Loved it!!

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  7. MartinaDecember 1, 2011 at 11:35 PM

    Sweet poem and picture - reminds me of summer - it's cold and foggy here now!

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  8. SamDecember 2, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    I like the line 'At twilight the day meets the night', I never thought of it like that. Thanks for your lovely kind wishes. It means so much to me :)

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  9. Rahul BhatiaDecember 2, 2011 at 8:51 AM

    @ Shreya- Such generous praise:)!Even if I can write 5% of what Wordsworth could, it would be a great day!Thanks a lot..
    @ Arti- Thank you for that lovely comment!
    @ Ria- Thanks for that sweet comment!
    @ Art- Thanks a lot !Have a nice weekend..
    @ The BB- Chintan,a sincere thanks! Hope you have a very nice weekend, notwithstanding, gloomy weather:)
    @ Lipsy- Welcome to my blog and a sincere thanks!
    @ Martina- Thank you for your gracious comment! Enjoy your weekend..
    @ Sam- So sweet! Hope you enjoyed the nice pink cake to celebrate the anniversary!!

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  10. UrmiDecember 2, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    Very sweet and beautiful poem. Liked it very much.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 2, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    Sounds like spring! Lovely writing.

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  12. Selvaggia CapizziDecember 2, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    Beautiful poetry! I can smell nature in your words!

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  13. ZuzanaDecember 2, 2011 at 1:10 PM

    I would sure love to be in the place you describe here, seems like paradise.;)
    Thank you so much for your always kind visits and comments.
    I have a few days off work now and thus have finally a bit more time to visit all my blog friends, including you.;)
    Have a lovely weekend,
    xoxo

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  14. ashokDecember 2, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    wonderful poem!

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  15. Rahul BhatiaDecember 2, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    @ Babli- Thanks for the compliment!
    @ Lady Fi- Here also, the winter has arrived! Thanks for liking!
    @ Ashwini- Welcome to my blog and thanks for your kind remark!
    @ Francesa R-Love that kind remark from you!
    @ Zuzana- Happy to see you again and I admire both your lovely writing as well as pictures!
    @ Ashok- Thanks for liking!

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  16. padmajaDecember 2, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    I wish I had the competence to transfer you poem on to my canvas,, very beautiful!

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  17. Rahul BhatiaDecember 2, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    Thanks Padmaja for that lovely comment!You can do even better on canvas.. :)

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  18. Rachna ChhabriaDecember 2, 2011 at 9:27 PM

    What a sweet poem, Rahul. Its tender like an unopened bud :)

    The picture is wonderful.

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  19. Rahul BhatiaDecember 2, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    Rachna, am honored with that comment and your kind appreciation!

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  20. GayatriDecember 2, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    All I can say is, you give life to words.

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  21. TaniaDecember 3, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    Ah, beautiful dance:-)
    Lovely written.

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  22. Rahul BhatiaDecember 3, 2011 at 3:48 AM

    @ Gayatri- Feel humbled with those lovely expressions of yours!
    @ Spiderdama- A sincere thanks for liking!

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  23. SagittarianDecember 3, 2011 at 5:03 AM

    Oh.. I love it how you delivered the word!:) Keep sharing more:)

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  24. KalyanDecember 3, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  25. kalaiselvisblogDecember 3, 2011 at 11:08 PM

    " Rising sun makes moon hide
    At twilight the day meets night"

    wow.. wonderful words Sir...loved it..

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  26. Rahul BhatiaDecember 4, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    @ Saggitarian- Thank you and those words of praise..
    @Kalyan- Welcome tomy bog and thanks for liking!
    @ Kalai- Thank you for your ardent support in my endeavor!:)

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  27. PurviDecember 5, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    You really like beautifully.. i could imagine and make a picture of each and every word you had written

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  28. Rahul BhatiaDecember 6, 2011 at 3:27 AM

    Thanks Purvi for liking!

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  29. :-DeeDecember 6, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    Such a delightful and beautiful poem... and being a nature lover myself.. i loved this poem!!! :)

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  30. SprigBlossomsDecember 7, 2011 at 2:31 AM

    What a delightful poem! I loved it :)

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  31. Rahul BhatiaDecember 7, 2011 at 6:07 AM

    @ Dee- Thanks a lot for liking and following my blog! Loved your blog and writing!
    @ SprigBlossoms- Thanks for those kind words of encouragement!

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  32. AnandDecember 17, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    nice usage of words.. the rhyming was good ji... nice read :)

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  33. Rahul BhatiaDecember 23, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Thanks a lot Anand for your kind appreciation

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  34. Saru SinghalJanuary 6, 2012 at 7:41 AM

    I missed it...Lovely...:)

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  35. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 6, 2012 at 8:59 AM

    Thanks Saru!

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