Thursday, December 1, 2011

The Dance of Nature

The ebb and swell of ocean tide
     Rising sun makes moon hide
At twilight the day meets night
    Twinkling stars wink n enchant
Rivers surge mountains with might
  Gurgling streams embrace them tight
Thunder and lightning scream n wry
   Colorful rainbows adorn the sky
Chirping nightingales and robins fly
    Dappled butterflies peck rosebuds sly
We watch this dance of nature
    Awed, bewildered, in recurrent delight

PS Image kind courtesy from Google


  1. Beautiful set of words, Sir. Loved this nature verse. Reminds me sort of "Wordsworth". :) Good one :)

  2. So beautiful! I can imagine all... Really delightful :)

  3. That was lovely Written!
    Have a nice day!

  4. Beautifully woven words....Loved it!!

  5. Sweet poem and picture - reminds me of summer - it's cold and foggy here now!

  6. I like the line 'At twilight the day meets the night', I never thought of it like that. Thanks for your lovely kind wishes. It means so much to me :)

  7. @ Shreya- Such generous praise:)!Even if I can write 5% of what Wordsworth could, it would be a great day!Thanks a lot..
    @ Arti- Thank you for that lovely comment!
    @ Ria- Thanks for that sweet comment!
    @ Art- Thanks a lot !Have a nice weekend..
    @ The BB- Chintan,a sincere thanks! Hope you have a very nice weekend, notwithstanding, gloomy weather:)
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    @ Martina- Thank you for your gracious comment! Enjoy your weekend..
    @ Sam- So sweet! Hope you enjoyed the nice pink cake to celebrate the anniversary!!

  8. Very sweet and beautiful poem. Liked it very much.

  9. Sounds like spring! Lovely writing.

  10. We see them and watch them everyday, still they appear more beautiful day after day and continue to enchant us. Very well written Sir!

  11. Beautiful poetry! I can smell nature in your words!

  12. I would sure love to be in the place you describe here, seems like paradise.;)
    Thank you so much for your always kind visits and comments.
    I have a few days off work now and thus have finally a bit more time to visit all my blog friends, including you.;)
    Have a lovely weekend,

  13. @ Babli- Thanks for the compliment!
    @ Lady Fi- Here also, the winter has arrived! Thanks for liking!
    @ Ashwini- Welcome to my blog and thanks for your kind remark!
    @ Francesa R-Love that kind remark from you!
    @ Zuzana- Happy to see you again and I admire both your lovely writing as well as pictures!
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  14. I wish I had the competence to transfer you poem on to my canvas,, very beautiful!

  15. Thanks Padmaja for that lovely comment!You can do even better on canvas.. :)

  16. What a sweet poem, Rahul. Its tender like an unopened bud :)

    The picture is wonderful.

  17. Rachna, am honored with that comment and your kind appreciation!

  18. All I can say is, you give life to words.

  19. Ah, beautiful dance:-)
    Lovely written.

  20. @ Gayatri- Feel humbled with those lovely expressions of yours!
    @ Spiderdama- A sincere thanks for liking!

  21. Oh.. I love it how you delivered the word!:) Keep sharing more:)

  22. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

  23. " Rising sun makes moon hide
    At twilight the day meets night"

    wow.. wonderful words Sir...loved it..

  24. @ Saggitarian- Thank you and those words of praise..
    @Kalyan- Welcome tomy bog and thanks for liking!
    @ Kalai- Thank you for your ardent support in my endeavor!:)

  25. You really like beautifully.. i could imagine and make a picture of each and every word you had written

  26. Such a delightful and beautiful poem... and being a nature lover myself.. i loved this poem!!! :)

  27. What a delightful poem! I loved it :)

  28. @ Dee- Thanks a lot for liking and following my blog! Loved your blog and writing!
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  29. nice usage of words.. the rhyming was good ji... nice read :)

  30. Thanks a lot Anand for your kind appreciation