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Wednesday, December 7, 2011

My Love


                                                                                    I
                                                                                  so
                                                                             Love you
                                                                      More than anyone
                                                                In this world of abhorrence
                                                      So much hate, so much mistrust what for
                                          Give peace a chance, let love grow, bring happiness, cheer, bliss, once more
We have traveled this difficult path before, holding hands, building mutual trust, sharing good times, so lets be friends, once more
                               We have lived in our own citadels with no concern of anyone before
                                                  The life is too short for trivial silly tribulations
                                                                 Look love in my eyes
                                                                      The same love
                                                                            As never
                                                                                ever
                                                                               before



PS: Please excuse the font size, to maintain the aesthetic beauty of design so created. The poem was written as an inspiration from Lady Fiona's challenge last week , with 1,1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 13, 8, 5, 3,2, 1,1 words
(Image kind courtesy Google)

38 comments:

  1. this is amazing..
    its like playing n having fun wid words :)

    Lovely read !!

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  2. Lovely, you did it. Nice, despite the fonts ;)

    P.S. I needed a microscope to read this. lol ;)

    You have a lot of space on your blog, make your post section wider. You can make it, just go to layout in your dashboard and hit template designer and you can make it thicker or thinner. Then it will look more beautiful. :)

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  3. Its so beautiful Rahul Ji :)
    very well written and expressed that too within the constraints of limited words.... great :)

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  4. Liked the creativity behind this concept and poem. Beautiful... with eyes get strain :)

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  5. I need to borrow Shreya's magnifying glass please, lol! Oh my, from the parts I could read, this is beautiful! Heavenly image! I will return to enjoy it's beauty more when I find a magnifying glass he he!

    You could break up the line of 21 words into two lines ~ Crystal did this on hers :) Thanks for directing my attention towards this and I thank you very much for participating in this challenge! :)

    Will be back later today. I'm looking forward to deciphering all of it's beauty :)

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  6. @ Jyoti,Shreya Purvi,Jeevan, Princess Fiona- So grateful to you all for those encouraging words!My apologies for wrecking havoc with small fonts to punish your innocent eyes. As suggested by Shreya, I changed the template which may be a shade better!

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  7. I could not read the whole thing clearly, but how much I could, it ws nice.. You used the pattern well :)

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  8. Thats very creative indeed Rahul ji. Must have been fun playing around with words like that.
    Have a wonderful week ahead:)

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  9. Loved it! I really missed reading chintan's and your blog while i was not regular.
    Reading the one's i missed from top to bottom!

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  10. nice write up... and the design created is also cute!

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  11. Very creative! Looks like such a fun challenge!

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  12. written very well! close to reality
    and pictured very well too!!

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  13. @ Raconteur- I am happy you liked it!
    @ PhilO- Give another try at reading, as I made some changes! Thanks for liking and your great story is unfolding well!
    @ Arti- It was fun to play around with words! Hope you too have a lovely week ahead..
    @Ashish- Good to see you back recharged from God'sown land :)
    @Ramya- Thanks a lot for liking!
    @Gayatri- Thanks a lot! It was a challenge and fun combined!

    PS- I want to thank you all to have supported this whimsical write up which was such a huge challenge to present on the screen of your computer:)

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  14. @ Harman- Thanks for those sweet words!

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  15. Ahh, now we can read and discover the complete beauty of your lovely Fibonacci Sonnet! LOVE it! You and so many others have presented masterpieces with this experimental form!

    The life is too short for trivial silly tribulations
    Look love in my eyes
    The same love
    As never
    Ever
    Before

    SO TRUE and you managed to capture this ending thought by providing us with the perfect visual companion! Bravo, Sir Rahul!!! :)

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  16. Princess Fiona- I am happy that I could live up to your expectation! Look for more reads from you which can infuse more energy in my writing!A big thanks!!!

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  17. Thanks, its working now! What a beautiful, beautiful poem. I like how you've balanced the good with the bad.

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  18. I see Fiona inspiring more people...nice attempt RB

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  19. Rahul ji :) Loved it so much :)

    And it's amazing how bloggers are creative and geeky at the same time :)

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  20. lovely poem & its nice 2 look Sir...

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  21. I had to put my glasses on but i really loved this poetry!!!

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  22. I loved both the poetry and the style of presenting it. The font size did not matter, Rahul.

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  23. @ Sam- Thanks for liking!
    @ Ashok- Agree ! There is something in Lady Fiona's poetry that is inspirational!
    @ TBB- Chintan! Am very happy that you liked it!Your blog is a compulsive reading material with ingenuity all over in whatever you choose to write about!
    @ Kalai Selvi- Thanks a ton for liking!
    @Eden- Thanks for your nice comment..
    Francesca R- My apologies for tasking your eyes but am happy that you liked it!
    @ PhilO- Thanks a lot Juhi for the revisit and liking!
    @ Rachna- Thanks a lot Rachna for liking this attempt!

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  24. It's beautiful, I think even I should try it. :)

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  25. @ Saru -What ever you write is always beautiful. Thanks for liking!
    @ Sujatha - Thanks for your kind appreciation

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  26. The life is to short yes.. very well written:-)

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  27. Very beuatiful poem and so visually pleasing as well.;) You describe the bond between lovers so eloquently.;))
    xoxo

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  28. Thanks Zuzana! You like the romantic ones.. ;)

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  29. You have done justice to he challenge! It's so in coherence with the technique....so good:)

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  30. wow this is so beautiful!
    the words matched perfectly with the picture....i loved the last lines! Great Work!

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  31. @ Nasnin- I am happy you liked it!
    @ Rosette Princess- Thanks a lot for liking!

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