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Wednesday, January 18, 2012

If Looks Could Kill




The time stood perfectly still
      Like I never thought it will
The misty eyes, those quivering lips
       Makes the heart pound at will
Please let me hold frail hand
        Feel the warmth of love mill
Dancing beads of morning mist
        Shimmer frolic in tress n trill
If looks alone could ever kill
        Today they silently n surely will

PS-Image kind courtesy Google
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75 comments:

  1. SamJanuary 18, 2012 at 4:58 AM

    Well written, I sense a sweet-but-sad tone in this poem.

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  2. AnjuliJanuary 18, 2012 at 7:31 AM

    intriguing piece!

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  3. RachnaJanuary 18, 2012 at 8:14 AM

    wah wah!

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  4. DimpleJanuary 18, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    beautiful... Wow!Very beautifully written poem..

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  5. AnandJanuary 18, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    very well written.. nice :)

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  6. --January 18, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    "If looks alone could ever kill
    Today they silently n surely will"

    Killer (no pun intended!) last line!!

    I loved the poem and the image is perfect! Great job, Sir Rahul :-)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 2:53 PM

      So kind of you Princesa Fiona for those nice words!

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  8. BGTJanuary 18, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    Ohh yes, looks could kill!! And after watching the pic, it really did kill :)

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  9. Sujatha SathyaJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    wah Sir aap toh shayar bhi hai - angrezi one :)
    her eyes are magnetic . aap toh fully ghayal ho gaye lagta hai :))

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 2:55 PM

      Sujatha, Tanhai shayar bana deti hai! Thanks for your nice comment!

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  10. dianneJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:38 AM

    Thank you dear Rahul for voting for my Haiku. I have removed the post from my blog until after the voting has finished as there was a tie and the original voting had already ended.

    A gorgeous image and poem dear Rahul, great work my friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  11. Deepak KarthikJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:56 AM

    first of all, i must confess that i can't take my eyes from that picture !
    magnetic one :) oof !
    Poem speaks the picture :) nice one sir !
    -DeepaK

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 2:58 PM

      It looks like the picture of those eyes yielded good dividend! Thanks a lot, Deepak!

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  12. induravisinghjJanuary 18, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    beautiful.....love to read ....

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 2:59 PM

      Welcome to my blog! Thank you for those nice words..

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  13. PurviJanuary 18, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    Truly beautiful :) :) very well written :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 3:03 PM

      Thanks a lot Purvi!It is always a pleasure to see your comments..

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  14. kalaiselvisblogJanuary 18, 2012 at 12:49 PM

    wow... lovely words Sir...
    she really has a very attractive eyes....

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  15. magiceyeJanuary 18, 2012 at 1:22 PM

    nice almost sensuous

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  16. Selvaggia CapizziJanuary 18, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    You are such a great poet! Theese words are really powerful!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 3:06 PM

      Francesca, thanks a lot for those generous words!

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  17. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 2:56 PM

    Thanks a lot Ashwini, for those nice words!

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  18. Shilpa GargJanuary 18, 2012 at 7:26 PM

    Wow!! Very beautifully expressed and yes these looks can surely kill!! :))

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  19. AyushiJanuary 18, 2012 at 7:31 PM

    It was beautiful :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 7:50 PM

      Am very happy you liked it!BTW belated Happy New Year as seeing you here after a long time..:)

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  20. Sahana RaoJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:02 PM

    Words! Killer! loved the poem. Pic just goes with the theme.

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 1:48 AM

      Thank You Sahana! Happy to see you again and wishing you a belated Happy New Year!!

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  21. KittyJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:21 PM

    Beautiful romantic lines !

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  22. AnandJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:24 PM

    I want to comment again Rahul-ji :)
    The choice of image is soo good and the words are awesome :)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 1:51 AM

      Anand, I am touched with your lovely gesture to revisit and add more to your earlier remark!Thanks a lot and readers like you make me write with even more zest!

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  23. Saru SinghalJanuary 19, 2012 at 12:50 AM

    How beautiful and romantic. Loved the last two lines, Sir...:)

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 1:52 AM

      Thanks a lot Saru! I treasure every remark from you:)

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  24. TaniaJanuary 19, 2012 at 2:15 AM

    Hehe, very good!! I am sure I've had that look..

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  25. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    Thank you Tanya, for liking!

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    1. hamaarethoughts.comJanuary 19, 2012 at 5:09 AM

      definitely deserves a round of applause...Gr8
      love every word!

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    2. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 10:15 AM

      Thank You Harman, for those kind words!

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  26. PhilO♥January 19, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    One look and you're dead, eh? :) Lovely! And how those mystique eyes work wonders :P

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  27. BikramJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:05 PM

    indeed sir.. if looks could kill a lovely picture and a beautiful poem to follow ..


    Bikram's

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:56 PM

      Welcome to my blog, Bikram! Thanks a lot for those nice words!

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  28. LadyFiJanuary 19, 2012 at 5:02 PM

    Wonderful words - wonderful!

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  29. JeevanJanuary 19, 2012 at 7:59 PM

    Remarkable indeed! loved it :)

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  30. VinatiJanuary 19, 2012 at 9:04 PM

    Beautiful poetry and specially its rhyming scheme. :)

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  31. PAPSJanuary 19, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    Well said.
    www.thoughtsofpaps.com

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  32. MartinaJanuary 20, 2012 at 1:33 AM

    Beautiful poem Rahul - oriental women, oh la la!

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    1. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:25 PM

      Thanks Martina! Yes Oriental women have lovely features!

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  33. SandhyaJanuary 20, 2012 at 11:00 AM

    The girl's eyes are beautiful and I can understand that they inspired you to write such a nice peom!

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  34. Sandeep PandeyJanuary 20, 2012 at 4:37 PM

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  35. sharmilaJanuary 20, 2012 at 11:13 PM

    Loved the poem.Very well written.

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  36. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 21, 2012 at 8:13 PM

    Thank you Sharmila for that nice comment! A sincere thanks for following my blog!

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  37. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    beautifull :)

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  38. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2012 at 9:16 PM

    *beautiful

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  39. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 22, 2012 at 4:01 AM

    Thanks Monica! Welcome to my blog!

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  40. KalyanJanuary 22, 2012 at 12:26 PM

    lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  41. GayatriJanuary 25, 2012 at 10:25 AM

    Perfect Rahulji. You certainly have a way with words.

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  42. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 25, 2012 at 7:55 PM

    Thanks Gayatri, for those kind words!

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  43. Megha SarinJanuary 30, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    Wow! love it!

    The pic is amazing..

    love
    http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

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  44. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 30, 2012 at 6:32 PM

    Thanks a lot Megha for having liked this !

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