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Wednesday, January 18, 2012

If Looks Could Kill




The time stood perfectly still
      Like I never thought it will
The misty eyes, those quivering lips
       Makes the heart pound at will
Please let me hold frail hand
        Feel the warmth of love mill
Dancing beads of morning mist
        Shimmer frolic in tress n trill
If looks alone could ever kill
        Today they silently n surely will

PS-Image kind courtesy Google

81 comments:

  1. Well written, I sense a sweet-but-sad tone in this poem.

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  2. "If looks alone could ever kill
    Today they silently n surely will"

    Killer (no pun intended!) last line!!

    I loved the poem and the image is perfect! Great job, Sir Rahul :-)

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    1. So kind of you Princesa Fiona for those nice words!

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  4. Ohh yes, looks could kill!! And after watching the pic, it really did kill :)

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  5. wah Sir aap toh shayar bhi hai - angrezi one :)
    her eyes are magnetic . aap toh fully ghayal ho gaye lagta hai :))

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    1. Sujatha, Tanhai shayar bana deti hai! Thanks for your nice comment!

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  6. The Picture is in absolute sync with your words. Beautifully written :-)

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    1. Thanks a lot Ashwini, for those nice words!

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  7. Thank you dear Rahul for voting for my Haiku. I have removed the post from my blog until after the voting has finished as there was a tie and the original voting had already ended.

    A gorgeous image and poem dear Rahul, great work my friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. My vote still stays with you:) Thanks a lot...

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  8. first of all, i must confess that i can't take my eyes from that picture !
    magnetic one :) oof !
    Poem speaks the picture :) nice one sir !
    -DeepaK

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    1. It looks like the picture of those eyes yielded good dividend! Thanks a lot, Deepak!

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    1. Welcome to my blog! Thank you for those nice words..

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  10. Truly beautiful :) :) very well written :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Purvi!It is always a pleasure to see your comments..

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  11. wow... lovely words Sir...
    she really has a very attractive eyes....

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    1. So kind of you Kalai for those nice words..

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  12. You are such a great poet! Theese words are really powerful!

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    1. Francesca, thanks a lot for those generous words!

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  13. Wow!! Very beautifully expressed and yes these looks can surely kill!! :))

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    1. Am very happy you liked it!BTW belated Happy New Year as seeing you here after a long time..:)

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  15. Words! Killer! loved the poem. Pic just goes with the theme.

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    1. Thank You Sahana! Happy to see you again and wishing you a belated Happy New Year!!

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  16. I want to comment again Rahul-ji :)
    The choice of image is soo good and the words are awesome :)

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    1. Anand, I am touched with your lovely gesture to revisit and add more to your earlier remark!Thanks a lot and readers like you make me write with even more zest!

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  17. How beautiful and romantic. Loved the last two lines, Sir...:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Saru! I treasure every remark from you:)

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  18. Hehe, very good!! I am sure I've had that look..

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    1. definitely deserves a round of applause...Gr8
      love every word!

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    2. Thank You Harman, for those kind words!

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  20. One look and you're dead, eh? :) Lovely! And how those mystique eyes work wonders :P

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  21. indeed sir.. if looks could kill a lovely picture and a beautiful poem to follow ..


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    1. Welcome to my blog, Bikram! Thanks a lot for those nice words!

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  22. Remarkable indeed! loved it :)

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  23. Beautiful poetry and specially its rhyming scheme. :)

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    1. Thanks a lot! I am happy you liked it:)

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  24. Well said.
    www.thoughtsofpaps.com

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  25. Beautiful poem Rahul - oriental women, oh la la!

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    1. Thanks Martina! Yes Oriental women have lovely features!

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  26. The girl's eyes are beautiful and I can understand that they inspired you to write such a nice peom!

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  29. Loved the poem.Very well written.

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  30. Thank you Sharmila for that nice comment! A sincere thanks for following my blog!

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  31. Thanks Monica! Welcome to my blog!

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  32. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  33. Perfect Rahulji. You certainly have a way with words.

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  34. Thanks Gayatri, for those kind words!

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  35. Wow! love it!

    The pic is amazing..

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  36. Thanks a lot Megha for having liked this !

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