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Thursday, January 5, 2012

Love


                                                                                         

                                                                      Love
                                                   Intimate, Irresistible, Invigorate
                                                       Alluring, Amazing, Adoring
                                      Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly
                                                                     Adore



PS : A Cinquain poem. 
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39 comments:

  1. VinatiJanuary 5, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    So crisp, it was. I liked the fourth line, specially. Beautiful! :)

    P.S: There is some problem with the blogger. I am not getting any of your updates. So I had to come and check personally.
    I hope this thing gets fixed soon.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    So true!

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  3. RiàJanuary 5, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    :)Nice.

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  4. Saru SinghalJanuary 5, 2012 at 7:55 PM

    I was thinking of writing it but I know I can't do justice like you did...Beautiful...:)

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  5. Nasnin NasserJanuary 5, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    It's beautiful:)

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  6. Shilpa GargJanuary 5, 2012 at 8:21 PM

    Very beautifully expressed!
    4th line sums up the awesome feeling of love!! :)

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  7. AnandJanuary 5, 2012 at 10:12 PM

    Amazing Rahul ji... "Love is the irresistible desire to be desired irresistibly" This is my super favorite line..

    New year wishes :)

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  8. ShreyaJanuary 5, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    Nice. I was thinking to write a Cinquain poem and you have already did it, means I am too slow. Lol :P

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  9. SamJanuary 5, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    SImple, concise and charming, a great poem

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  10. --January 6, 2012 at 1:35 AM

    Dear Rahul :)

    First of all, thank you for participating in the challenge and for letting me know your contribution is published!

    You did justice to not only the form of the Cinquain, but also to the topic of LOVE! I originally thought of presenting this subject as my first one. I'm glad I didn't now because I could not have creating one as lovely as this :-)

    I especially love the fact that you included one of my favorite quotes in line 4! Bravo! Needless to say, I love this cinquain about love! Well done, Sir! :-)

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2012 at 3:38 AM

    What a brilliant piece Rahul ji :-)

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  12. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 6, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    @ Mirage- Thanks for your sweet comment! It is disappointing to learn that the feed is not being updated :(
    I tried something.. please confirm if you can see it now..
    @lady Fi- Thanks!
    @ Ria- Thanks a lot!
    @ Saru- I now need to learn humility from you besides writing good poetry!Thanks a lot for your nice comment!
    @ Nasnin- Good to see you back! Happy New Year and thanks a lot for your sweet comments!
    @ Shilpa- Am grateful to you for that nice remark!
    @ Anand- Happy New Year to you and thanks for liking!
    @ Shreya- You are very fast! I happen to be faster as I am in a different time zone:)
    @ Sam- Thanks for your kind appreciation!
    @ Princess Fiona- You keep creating a challenge and it keeps us moving!Well you are too kind to say those words and I need my lessons from likes of you and Saru in writing good poetry and being humble at the same time!
    @ Chintan- Very kind of you for that generous praise! I wish I could write on so many diverse things like you and still keep the reader glued:)

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  13. RachnaJanuary 6, 2012 at 10:06 AM

    Lovely, lovely!

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  14. Alka GurhaJanuary 6, 2012 at 11:39 AM

    Difficult to define the word....

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  15. AnjuliJanuary 6, 2012 at 1:44 PM

    Ah these poems are not easy to do- I know, I've dabbled in them- you've done an excellent job!!

    Great writing.

    p.s.
    I was relieved to see Mirage also has been having trouble getting the updates on blogger- so that means it is not just my own blog roll, but possible a fault in the entire system.

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  16. Selvaggia CapizziJanuary 6, 2012 at 2:48 PM

    Beautiful poem! So true!

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  17. dianneJanuary 6, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    So beautiful dear Rahul!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. Rachna ChhabriaJanuary 6, 2012 at 10:35 PM

    Its beautiful. Enjoyed it :)

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  19. AshJanuary 7, 2012 at 3:57 AM

    Lovely! Happy new year to you and yours!

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  20. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 7, 2012 at 4:51 AM

    @ Rachna- Thanks a lot!
    @ Alka- Yes Love is like an ocean and difficult to define..
    @ Anjuli-Thank you for your kind appreciation! Are you getting the feed from my post now?
    @ Francesca- So kind of you! Thanks..
    @ Dianne- Thanks a lot
    @ Rachna Chhabria- Thanks a ton!
    @ Ash- Happy New Year! Thanks a lot

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  21. SandhyaJanuary 7, 2012 at 6:51 AM

    Very right words, Rahulji!

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  22. PhilO♥January 7, 2012 at 12:56 PM

    Was like a tongue twister :P

    Nice lines :)

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  23. SagittarianJanuary 7, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Hi Rahul! :) So lovely Cinquain! :) It happen we got same title at Cinquain that I posted yesterday!:)) lols.. Happy to know that we felt the same yesterday!!:) You can visit at my blog too! :)

    http://whereitshouldbegin.blogspot.com
    http://discoveritjustnow.blogspot.com
    http://torresrosalinda72.blogspot.com

    Happy to visit your blog! :) Keep sharing! :)

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  24. TaniaJanuary 7, 2012 at 3:05 PM

    Beautiful poem!
    So true.

    Enjoy your weekend:-)

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  25. ArtiJanuary 7, 2012 at 6:40 PM

    Beautifully composed Rahul ji. Especially loved the 2nd line...
    Hope you have a happy weekend:)

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  26. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 7, 2012 at 7:07 PM

    @ Sandhya- Thanks for visiting my blog and liking!
    @ PhilO- Welcome back in the New Year! Hope you have a lovely year ahead!Next time I will make it easier to read and with less twist:)
    @ Sagittarian- You wrote a lovely one! Thanks a lot, for liking this..
    @ Spiderdama- Thanks a lot!
    @ Arti- Thanks for your nice comment! Hope you too have a lovely weekend ahead..

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  27. kalaiselvisblogJanuary 8, 2012 at 5:05 PM

    dats so beautiful sir...
    Fiona makes us to have fun in such kinda challenges...

    its very interesting too...

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  28. BGTJanuary 8, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    Love described in few (yet powerful) words! Great..

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  29. KalyanJanuary 8, 2012 at 9:53 PM

    So true...that is the thing which takes our life forward.

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  30. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 9, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    @ Kalai- Fiona keeps throwing challenges for us to take on! Thanks!
    @ Binu- Thanks a lot for liking!
    @ kalyan- Thanks for your kind appreciation!

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  31. DimpleJanuary 9, 2012 at 2:55 PM

    awww... beautifully write.. Love is something everyone longs for..

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  32. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 10, 2012 at 1:47 AM

    Thanks , Single Girl! Yes Love is all one needs to make the journey of life enjoyable!

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  33. KittyJanuary 11, 2012 at 12:26 PM

    Beautiful cinquain ! :)

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  34. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 11, 2012 at 1:08 PM

    Thanks a lot Kitty for your kind appreciation!

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  35. hamaarethoughts.comJanuary 12, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    GR8..valentine is around the corner......
    have a good one with your near n dear ones!

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  36. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 12, 2012 at 9:30 AM

    Thanks Harman! Wishing you the the same!

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  37. edenJanuary 13, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    Love it! Very true!

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  38. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 13, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    Thanks Eden for liking!

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  39. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:46 AM

    Thanks Ashwini, for your kind appreciation!

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