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Monday, August 12, 2013

A Fragrant Begining



Hairdo was perfect and so was make up, on the sweet face
    Playful sparkle in the eyes glowed in kohl lined almond base
Gold n red bangles play softly, with shimmer of her dress trace
     She was a bride beauty fresh n happy, like a fragrant rose brace
A gentle perfumed kiss of the lavender tinged chilled air
   Brings back sweet memories of many a playful childhood years
She now heads new abode bidding adieu to loving peers
    New hopes and aspirations fill heart pounding, forgetting despair


PS: 1. This poem expresses the ‘Fresh n Happy, Experience’ of a new bride who is leaving her home in a car for a  journey with her soul mate to lead a new life.
This is my entry for the ‘Ambipur Mini Vent Clip Contest’
 2. Image kind courtesy Yahoo

68 comments:

  1. A very Lovely poem Rahul Sir.
    Walking down the aisle is certainly the most sad and happiest experiences for a bride. The sorrow of leaving a major part of life and the thrill of entering into a new journey is breathtaking and nostalgic....
    gud luck for the contest.:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Jemina! You pretty much summed up what was left for me to say:)

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  2. Wonderfully written, beautifully describes the enthusiasm and excitement surrounding the life of a new bride.

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    1. Thanks Sam! The feelings are same no matter to which part of the world the bride belongs to:)

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  3. Lovely!!! You managed to say it all, in just a few words...

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    1. A big thanks, Akanksha for such a nice comment:)

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  4. Wow lovely thought for the contest, I loved the angle u choose for contest and words in the poems are very lovely :D

    Awesome one yet again Rahul sir :D

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    1. Thank You, Ramya for those generous words:)

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  5. Beautiful and precise: a very nice poem.

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  6. In rhythm with every new bride's heart, so beautiful!good luck with the contest!

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  7. Very beautiful dear Rahul, I feel your words as once being a bride myself and watching my daughter leave as a bride beginning her journey of a new life...sad and happy moments.
    Good luck with the competition!
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. So true Dianne, incomparable moments of joy and sadness on this occasion:)

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  8. Excellent poem. It describes so vividly the feelings of a bride leaving her parent's house. All the best for the contest.

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    1. Thanks a lot, Ushaji for your kind comment!

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    1. A huge thanks, Uma for the support through these kind words:)

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  10. Beautiful poem, I hope Vaidehi has read it.

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    1. Thanks Saru for that appreciation! I mentioned about you to her for may be for nth time:)

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  11. Very true feelings of a bride, nicely expressed!

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    1. Thanks a lot Sandhya! Happy you liked:)

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  12. In few words you said that all and that too beautifully :-)
    Best wishes!

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  14. Once again a lovely poem Rahul. " A gentle perfumed kiss of the lavender tinged chilled air." Wow! What is there not to like in these words. They are beautiful, just like the bride :)

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    1. Once again, a big thanks for that appreciation, Rachna:)

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  15. Hi

    Quite creative i must say..most of the bloggers have written abt their college or family trips only! lovely poem and all the best :)

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  16. Wow! Emotions explained wonderfully! All the best for the contest sir :)

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  17. Very lovely poem with precise and convincing expressions. Maybe I,a mother feel emotionally,though.
    Enjoy Summer!

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    1. Thanks a lot Sarah for being able to connect:)

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    1. Very nice to see you back after a long break break Latha:)Thanks a lot!

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  19. Thanks for your kind comment, wishing you a relaxing weekend.

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  20. Very lovely and sweet poem! I wish you the best with this!

    Hope you have a blessed weekend:-) Hugs from north

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    1. Thanks a lot Tania! Wish you a happy weekend:)

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  21. Absolute, interesting and lovely lines! thanks for sharing with us....Dear..

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  22. Absolutely lovely and full of essence!

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  23. There is nothing that can express the Happiness and pain, at the thought of starting a new life and leaving behind our loved ones. Wonderfully expressed Sir :-)

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    1. So agree with you! Thanks for liking Ashwini:)

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  24. Lovely poem. Good luck with the contest.

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    1. Thanks a lot Ramakant for those kind words!

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  25. The poem and its words express freshness and happiness in plenty...
    Good luck for the contest..

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    1. Thanks indeed for that very nice comment Manjulika:)

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  26. Reminds me of my own wedding Rahul :)

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    1. That was really a very sweet comment , Jaishree:) thank you!

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  27. The poem is no doubt beautiful but what i liked most is how so very intelligently you have merged Ambipur's Mini Vent Clip exp too as well..

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    1. Thanks a lot Preetilata and it is delighting to get comments from readers like you:)

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  28. What an idea sir ji :) Few words are enough to express everything you wanna re-direct...All the best!

    Jasmeet
    Ur new follower :)

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    1. You made my day Jasmeet with twin those lovely words and for following my blog too:) A huge thanks !!

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