Hairdo was perfect and so was make up, on the sweet face
Playful sparkle in the eyes glowed in kohl
lined almond base
Gold n red bangles play softly, with shimmer of her dress trace
She was a bride beauty fresh n happy, like a
fragrant rose brace
A gentle perfumed kiss of the lavender tinged chilled air
Brings back sweet
memories of many a playful childhood years
She now heads new abode bidding adieu to loving peers
New hopes and aspirations
fill heart pounding, forgetting despair
PS: 1. This poem expresses the ‘Fresh n Happy, Experience’ of a
new bride who is leaving her home in a car for a journey with her soul mate to lead a new
life.
This is my entry for the ‘Ambipur Mini Vent Clip Contest’
A very Lovely poem Rahul Sir.
ReplyDeleteWalking down the aisle is certainly the most sad and happiest experiences for a bride. The sorrow of leaving a major part of life and the thrill of entering into a new journey is breathtaking and nostalgic....
gud luck for the contest.:)
Thanks a lot Jemina! You pretty much summed up what was left for me to say:)
DeleteWonderfully written, beautifully describes the enthusiasm and excitement surrounding the life of a new bride.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam! The feelings are same no matter to which part of the world the bride belongs to:)
DeleteLovely!!! You managed to say it all, in just a few words...
ReplyDeleteA big thanks, Akanksha for such a nice comment:)
Deletewow..this is amazing
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ifra for liking:)
DeleteWow lovely thought for the contest, I loved the angle u choose for contest and words in the poems are very lovely :D
ReplyDeleteAwesome one yet again Rahul sir :D
Thank You, Ramya for those generous words:)
DeleteBeautiful and precise: a very nice poem.
ReplyDeleteA big thanks, Rama for that comment!
DeleteSo very lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank Lady Fi!
DeleteVery soulful composition.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Induji!
DeleteIn rhythm with every new bride's heart, so beautiful!good luck with the contest!
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Padmaja for liking:)
DeleteVery beautiful dear Rahul, I feel your words as once being a bride myself and watching my daughter leave as a bride beginning her journey of a new life...sad and happy moments.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the competition!
xoxoxo ♡
So true Dianne, incomparable moments of joy and sadness on this occasion:)
DeleteExcellent poem. It describes so vividly the feelings of a bride leaving her parent's house. All the best for the contest.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Ushaji for your kind comment!
DeleteFlawless flow of the poem. Liked it !
ReplyDeleteA huge thanks, Uma for the support through these kind words:)
DeleteBeautiful poem, I hope Vaidehi has read it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru for that appreciation! I mentioned about you to her for may be for nth time:)
DeleteVery true feelings of a bride, nicely expressed!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sandhya! Happy you liked:)
DeleteIn few words you said that all and that too beautifully :-)
ReplyDeleteBest wishes!
Thanks Simran for those words:)
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ReplyDeleteOnce again a lovely poem Rahul. " A gentle perfumed kiss of the lavender tinged chilled air." Wow! What is there not to like in these words. They are beautiful, just like the bride :)
ReplyDeleteOnce again, a big thanks for that appreciation, Rachna:)
DeleteThanks for your kind visit.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sam!
Deletebeautiful Rahulji
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashok!
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ReplyDeleteQuite creative i must say..most of the bloggers have written abt their college or family trips only! lovely poem and all the best :)
Thanks a lot for that comment!
DeleteWow! Emotions explained wonderfully! All the best for the contest sir :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Binu! Good to see you back:)
DeleteVery lovely poem with precise and convincing expressions. Maybe I,a mother feel emotionally,though.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy Summer!
Thanks a lot Sarah for being able to connect:)
DeleteSo true...soulful..
ReplyDeleteVery nice to see you back after a long break break Latha:)Thanks a lot!
DeleteThanks for your kind comment, wishing you a relaxing weekend.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend Sam:)
DeleteVery lovely and sweet poem! I wish you the best with this!
ReplyDeleteHope you have a blessed weekend:-) Hugs from north
Thanks a lot Tania! Wish you a happy weekend:)
DeleteAbsolute, interesting and lovely lines! thanks for sharing with us....Dear..
ReplyDeleteNice one, Rahul!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Eden:)
DeleteAbsolutely lovely and full of essence!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Jeevan!
DeleteSo agree with you! Thanks for liking Ashwini:)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Good luck with the contest.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ramakant for those kind words!
DeleteThe poem and its words express freshness and happiness in plenty...
ReplyDeleteGood luck for the contest..
Thanks indeed for that very nice comment Manjulika:)
DeleteReminds me of my own wedding Rahul :)
ReplyDeleteThat was really a very sweet comment , Jaishree:) thank you!
DeleteThe poem is no doubt beautiful but what i liked most is how so very intelligently you have merged Ambipur's Mini Vent Clip exp too as well..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Preetilata and it is delighting to get comments from readers like you:)
DeleteWhat an idea sir ji :) Few words are enough to express everything you wanna re-direct...All the best!
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Ur new follower :)
You made my day Jasmeet with twin those lovely words and for following my blog too:) A huge thanks !!
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