The sky was metallic grey and
gust of cold wind was blowing. The city was
glittering in the neon lights and roads were crowded. I was rushing through the weekend crowd to
reach her apartment on 48th street, having walked from the Grand
Central station, I walked past the Rockfeller Centre and climbed the lift.
The phone in the hotel rang
on the previous day and I immediately recognized the voice at the other end.
‘Hey Alok, I just came to
know that you arrived here yesterday for the training, come over to our place
tomorrow for dinner, she sounded excited. Barkha was the Regional Manager of our
company based in New York! I had arrived in New York two days earlier for a month long training, and was staying in
Long Island .
‘Sure Barkha, it will be a
pleasure to meet you, as I jotted down her address’, feeling happy inwards that
here I am in a new place and what a stroke of good luck to be invited for
dinner on the very first weekend itself!
I pressed the bell and the
door opened! I was swept off my feet as I
looked at her! Sparkling eyes, diamond trinkets, curled tresses, a soft shade
of pink gloss and a striking yellow saree! She did not appear a day older than
30 years though she was mother of two
young girls aged 14 and 10! It seems that the time had stood still since I
had first met her in our office canteen many years back. She was very
popular and I had a crush for her! Then
one day she came and announced that she was getting engaged and I shook her
hands and congratulated her as my
dreams collapsed like a house of cards. She
welcomed me, as if was a member of her
family. How time flew while chatting, eating and drinking, I did not realize.
Her husband worked as a doctor in Sloan Kettering Memorial Hospital in the New
York City, and was a equally warm person.
While talking, she casually
inquired, why I had not married? ‘
I joked,’ I could not find
someone like you’.
‘Ha ha , I don’t have a
younger sister, or else would have suggested to you’, she sportingly replied.
I thanked her and her husband
who bid me good bye as I got up to catch the late evening train from Grand
Central Penn station back to the Long Island. During my month long stay, I met
them one more time.
Time elapsed and I got
married to Tanvi who had almost similar features as Barka, a role model in my
mind! Barkha too came to India and was posted in the same office as mine as a
Senior Director now ! She had a knack to
make the team work like a clock-work mechanism, rarely loosing her cool. She
would write letters to the wives of some of her co workers every year around
the New Year time, conveying her thanks for support they indirectly gave in
achieving the targets of the company. A very rare gesture in today’s world! She treated the entire group
as her extended family.
One day she came to the
office and called for an urgent meeting with everyone. We assembled, about
thirty odd employees, in a small conference room. ‘ I wanted to share a news
with you all before you hear from others’. ‘ In two months time I am moving to
our London office, my daughters are already there with my husband’ she
continued. The meeting lasted for just fifteen minutes!
After two months she had
moved to London on a promotion. Time went by! It was almost an year now, since
she had gone. One day about ten of us got a mail from her, to join her with her
family on the Silver Jubilee of their Wedding Anniversary in Dubai. We just had
to pay for our tickets and rest of it was being taken care by her. When I broke
the news to my wife, she was equally excited and the promise to see a new place
was difficult to resist! Within a week
at least five of us replied to her in affirmative for a function about three
months away!
The wait was over and we
arrived in Dubai to be carted away to the Sheraton at Deira! Barka and her
husband gave us a warm reception after
introducing us to her family . We felt refreshed after a long flight having
remained awake for most of the night. The next three days of festivities,
including a Desert Safari, a visit to the Gold Souk , Spice Market , and a
visit to the tallest tower Burj Dubai became permanently etched in our
memories! I do not recollect having so much fun ever and Tanvi too had never
experienced such a royal reception earlier! What made it even more memorable
was that Barkha was more than a family where some relations become special and get
stronger even if not related by blood! All of us had traveled all the way from
India just to meet her on this special occasion even though we do not attend
many a functions of our own relatives
even when we stay in the same country!
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laughing at myself....for waiting for an unexpected twist at the end where as the story is a plain simple one. Good luck for the contest, Rahul sir.
ReplyDeleteHa Ha you expected something spicy, Latha:) Won't disappoint next time! Thanks a lot!
DeleteA very simple tale told in your trademark style. Good luck, Rahul!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your best wishes Rachna! Simple story:)
DeleteBarkha sounds too good to be true!
ReplyDeleteAll the best for the contest, Rahul and congratulations on your win.
True Purba, but I have been fortunate to run into a number of nice souls! Thanks for your best wishes!
DeleteA beautifully simple post. Best of luck with the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Red for reading and your best wishes!
DeleteVery nicely written :) and All the Best! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Radhika for having liked!
Deleteand here I was digging each line for clue about the endings when I read the story,:P I was trolled..:P
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the contest Rahul Sir..:D
Ha Ha Jemina, no unusual twists to the story! Thanks a lot for your best wishes:)
DeleteInteresting one...
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Thans a lot Krishna!
DeleteYou are right......expected something spicy
ReplyDeleteOk ! Next time more spice :)
DeleteInterestingly narrated, simple story! Enjoyed the video too! This happens in many Indian families!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sandhya for reading!
DeleteAnd they all lived happily for ever after ! I love happy endings :) I loved your description of the young lady "Sparkling eyes, diamond trinkets, curled tresses, a soft shade of pink gloss and a striking yellow saree". You describe well !
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Rama ! Not enough words to thank you for that comment!
DeleteWho else could win if you write such fantastic engaging posts???? Awesome one Rahul sir it takes real skill for a contest and yet keep the readers engaged :) loved it
ReplyDeleteRamya, readers like you make my day and make me feel like a bird perched on a tree top:) A huge thanks!
DeleteSuch a wonderful post. All the best. I am a sucker for happy endings :)
ReplyDeleteA big thanks Jas for that nice comment:)
DeleteI loved the unique take on the contest.. going further is more about the feeling than the distance...
ReplyDeleteA matter of interpretation but surly agree with your view point, Manjulika:)
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ReplyDeleteI like your post very much , i like to read this article
Thanks!
DeleteA great entry for the contest!
ReplyDeletebeautiful entry for the contest!!
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DeleteBarkha sounds like an all round amazing person, so spirited and kind! A wonderful post to remind us there are still wonderful people out there. All the best for the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sam! Some people leave a lasting impression:)
DeleteThanks so much for kindly stopping by...wishing you a marvelous weekend!
DeleteA pleasure always Sam:) You too have a nice week ahead!
DeleteTrue Ashwini! Nice colleagues can make all the difference! Thanks for your best wishes:)
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. I want a colleague like this too.
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:) Thank you Asamptha!
DeleteI was drawn this nice story. And I remembered New York where I visited once and nice people pleased me.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice day!
Thanks a lot, Sarah!
DeleteUnique piece!
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Thanks a lot:)
DeleteLove the story Rahul. It will make a brilliant short story if you add a twist in the end (definitely competition worthy). You write exceptionally well.
ReplyDeleteA sincere thanks Rachna for those words! I now have to pen a story with twists very soon:)
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