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Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Dreamgirl


The long flowing black tresses
 Cascade like an elegant waterfall
Her deep blue almond eyes
 Studded sapphires on a crescent wall
The sweet pout of luscious lips
 Curled rose buds embraced in a lock
The rising globes of bosoms
 Adore majestic hour glass stalk
She walks into my dreams
 With a grace of a dancing peacock
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11 comments:

  1. CяystalNovember 2, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    A dancing peacock? :)
    This was Beaaaaautiful, sir.

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  2. kalaiselvisblogNovember 2, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    excellent words Sir...

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  3. dianneNovember 2, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    Such a beautiful poem dear Rahul, so romantic and so visual.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  4. ShreyaNovember 2, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Beautiful. Every single line is a "wow". Awesome!!

    God bless :)

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  5. ArtNovember 2, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Thanks for the nice comment on my blog!

    This was a lovely poem!

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  6. --November 3, 2011 at 3:53 AM

    Absolutely gorgeous, Rahul! There are even lovely woven rhymes into it! Bravo, dear Sir!! :)

    The dancing peacock made me smile :D

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  7. Rahul BhatiaNovember 3, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    @ Crystal- Thanks for liking!
    @ Kalaiselvi- Thanks for your appreciation.
    @ Dianne- I am happy that you liked it!
    @Shreya- A big thanks for liking!
    @ Art- Thanks for visiting my blog and liking this poem.
    @Lady Fiona- Thank you for those kind words! I am happy that I managed to bring a smile!

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  8. AnonymousNovember 3, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    So beautifully descriptive and lyrical!

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  9. Rahul BhatiaNovember 4, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Thank You LadyFi!

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  10. Ruchi JainNovember 4, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    your dream girl is a basket of beauty...nice..

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  11. Rahul BhatiaNovember 6, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    Thank you Ruchi for your nice words!

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